Cassidy

Cassidy

A Poem by audrie

Wobbly knees
learning to walk
touched all that she sees
dances only to rock

curly hair 
existing without a care
big brown eyes
love you so incredibly much 
I can hardly bare

displaying so much feelings of joy
so very excited when you get a new toy

dressed you only in dresses
cleaned all of your messes
love to hold you
gave you soft caresses

I want to tell you how much  i love you
I love you immensely 
and all that you do



© 2014 audrie



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I had an immense feeling of playful jealousy toward the child due to envying the life they must be growing up with as such as talented & creative mother as yourself audrie! Dont ever let go of that! Excellent verse

Posted 3 Years Ago


audrie

3 Years Ago

Thank you for that lovely review!
I want to tell you how much i love you
I love you immensely
and all that you do.

Love this too. Lovely.

Posted 3 Years Ago


audrie

3 Years Ago

Thank you! = ]
What a wonderful ode to your daughter I am assuming. Parenthood is one of the greatest gifts from god along with marriage and following grandparenthood. I have been blessed to relive raising my son through rearing my grandson Karson who is so much like his Uncle Jake (he's my daughter Jessica's son). I want to share a poem I wrote when my daughter and I were estranged called Chalk Rainbows.

http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/seasonofverse/1137622/

Posted 3 Years Ago


I understand this love all too well.

Posted 3 Years Ago


audrie

3 Years Ago

Heya - just realized that you left this review. Nobody can understand the love you feel for a child .. read more
Awwwww. A mother's love. Ain't nothin' that comes close.
Except maybe a father's. :)

But it's a different bond.
Really like this.

Posted 3 Years Ago


audrie

3 Years Ago

Ha Ha! Thanks for taking the time to read this
You did not share the pics of your lovely angel but we quite get it through your poem :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


audrie

3 Years Ago

Oh, thanks. I didn't even think of it
Wow, this poem is so sweet, she must be a very lucky girl! :-) brilliantly executed.

Kaze~

Posted 3 Years Ago


audrie

3 Years Ago

Thanks Kaze- she's a teenager now- oh, what fun - ha ha
Blackstar

3 Years Ago

Haha, your very welcome. :-) :-D
this poem tells us how much you love her, and i am sure she knows, she has to be able to feel it.

Posted 3 Years Ago


audrie

3 Years Ago

Thanks Jacob - I can't even put into words how much I love my children - thanks for the review

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Added on July 6, 2014
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