I Know Who You Are

I Know Who You Are

A Poem by audrie

You're like the eclipse of the moon
half here, half there

You're like the stars in the sky
a billion miles away

You're like the ocean
so mysterious deep underneath

You're like a wild bird
easily scared into flight

You're like a river and the rapids
unknowingly changing your flow

You're like a blustery day
always changing directions

You're like a canyon
beautiful but deadly if lost inside

You're like storm clouds
dark and grey emotions

I'm lost in trying to understand you
I yearn to change you ways
but you're not capable of change
so we'll go our separate ways

© 2014 audrie



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I love this piece, the flow of the poem is brilliant. Your very descriptive in your words, its amazing!



Posted 2 Years Ago


I yearn to change you ways
but you're not capable of change
so we'll go our separate ways
i've loved it so muche nice :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


I love this piece. It flowed with the imagery but through these images you caught the emotion as well. Brilliant!

Posted 2 Years Ago


audrie

2 Years Ago

Thank you for the kind review!
Beautifully, expressed & written & quite charming.

Posted 3 Years Ago


audrie

3 Years Ago

Thanks a lot!
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Pax
we all have our flaws, if we can't connect to them as a whole, it will be hard to connect to someone else. There is so much truth in this piece, about relations that gone in separate ways, never again to be repair as it was in the past, but can be repair through friendship and forgiveness. Thanks for sharing such wonderful piece my friend...

Posted 3 Years Ago


audrie

3 Years Ago

You're absolutely welcome friend. . . thanks for the thoughtful review!
I like this because of the truth of it. So many people naively go into relationships trying to understand someone and it's not always possible or even needed. Why is it necessary to understand someone to love them? And of course change can only come from within, we cannot implement it on someone else.

Posted 3 Years Ago


audrie

3 Years Ago

That's true - you can't force someone to change, it does have to come from within. thanks for the re.. read more
accept them for who they are don't try to change anyone love them or leave them alone changing them will only bring you heartache. Well written poem.

Posted 3 Years Ago


audrie

3 Years Ago

couldn't agree more!
Love the flow and feeling of this write.

Posted 3 Years Ago


audrie

3 Years Ago

Thanks Jon = ]
Its beautiful. THe comparisons are brilliant, I loved them. Reminds me of the person I love, how much I try to change his habits and how he never gets rid of them but then in the end you know what is going to happen.. :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


audrie

3 Years Ago

I'm glad you could relate to this. Sometimes you just have to know when it's over. Thanks for the .. read more
priya

3 Years Ago

my pleasure. :)

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I am a social worker and an artist. I am by no means a professional writer but enjoy doing it now and again. I am all about peace, balance and harmony. Looking forward to reading all sorts of stuff.. more..

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