Just Another Poem

Just Another Poem

A Poem by Fate


..I remember every words..every lines..
       And every details.. 
      when you told me you wish time would stop spinning...
     or that at least time would slow down..
    cause to me you don't wanna say goodbye....


Just Another Poem
       -Fate-

© 2015 Fate



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I tried to review this earlier but it wouldn't let me! This is such a sweet poem, I especially love "when you told me you wish time would stop spinning..." time really spins sometimes especially when you don't want something to end, very powerful :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


Fate

1 Year Ago

thanks for the review:)
I love this soft side of yours... you create a beautiful, serene image with your words. When I read it I feel like I am there with this mysterious woman, not wanting to say goodbye :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


Fate

1 Year Ago

thanks sir :) for the review... I appreciate it.
So tender and bittersweet. There is a beautiful love drifting in your thoughts. Goodbye; I've learned how horribly painful that small word can be.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Fate

1 Year Ago

thanks for the review Mr. Froman :)
...hmn, yeah it is horribly painful!..I hate goodbyes..it.. read more

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Added on October 10, 2015
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Fate
Fate

Philippines



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Hi I'm Fate..My parents gave me a long name so I cut it short.. Fate. But my real name is Francia Theresa Lianza Oliver. I am 21 years old. I just love writing.. more..

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