Just Another Poem

..I remember every words..every lines..

       And every details.. 

      when you told me you wish time would stop spinning...

     or that at least time would slow down..

    cause to me you don't wanna say goodbye....

Just Another Poem

       -Fate-

Reviews

[BlaqkShadow]

I tried to review this earlier but it wouldn't let me! This is such a sweet poem, I especially love "when you told me you wish time would stop spinning..." time really spins sometimes especially when you don't want something to end, very powerful :)

[Fate]

thanks for the review:)

[AaronFreitas]

I love this soft side of yours... you create a beautiful, serene image with your words. When I read it I feel like I am there with this mysterious woman, not wanting to say goodbye :)

[Fate]

thanks sir :) for the review... I appreciate it.

[An owl on the moon]

So tender and bittersweet. There is a beautiful love drifting in your thoughts. Goodbye; I've learned how horribly painful that small word can be.

[Fate]

thanks for the review Mr. Froman :)
...hmn, yeah it is horribly painful!..I hate goodbyes..it made me sick.. and sad