Darkness

Let me drown, in your sea of tears

Feel the terrors of night 

let me shield from dark

Let us welcome light.

Alone becomes lonely, 

but then feels like home,

Comfortable,trapped

Loved ,cherished

as one.

Let us sink, thoughts of hope

Bring through our light.

The devilish feeling

resounds inside.

I wipe away your tears

and fears of the night.

Cry, shed your tears

I will be near your side.

Reviews

[Tate Morgan]

As with many works i do not know the cause but brotherhood and selflessness come to mind

[Wolf]

very romantic yet mysterious

[Cynthia]

Oh, I loev this!
I agree, this is comfort to read, it's very smooth
Strong Poem with Beautiful Words...

[Kerry O'Connor]

I felt very comforted as I read these words - speaks of a warm and generous spirit.

[Fabian G. Franklin]

This was sweet and comforting like a cup of hot chocolate on a cold day...delicious.

[Freeman]

Thank you very much......

I like this the best of all your pieces (and theyre all great) This is such a lovely write

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I really like this I found softness in this write.

a tender write

[Coyote Poetry]

"let me shield from dark
Let us welcome light."
Better to have two to survive the night. Hard to fight some battles alone. I like this poem. Create a situation and answer.
"Comfortable,trapped
Loved ,cherished
as one."
I like this poem. A strong poem with beautiful words. A outstanding poem.
Coyote