Tragedy

For shes icarus on a cloudy day

Melting flight feathers by a candles heat

As her Daedalus stands by screeching, "Higher!'

Then down, violet sea rising to meet her

And as numbing waves wrap her in darkness

She tastes sunrises behind her closed eyes 

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i see Ted being Daedalus...and the other Sylvia (Plath) being icarus...
Mostly cloudy days for her...and hopefully there was a sunrise for her in the end...and she is enjoying them now.
needs a couple apostrophes...but a really intense, short piece of writing.
j.