First Breath

First Breath

A Poem by Frieda P
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New Life, New Year Senryu ....

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A newborn baby cries

The circle of life unfolds

Angels take a bow




© 2012 Frieda P



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A beautiful and hopeful poem. Children create hope and purpose. Thank you for the excellent poem,.
Coyote

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

4 Years Ago

thanks Coyote
As you should too ~~ such a great writer you most certainly are. This carries such beauty!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

4 Years Ago

Thank you Tarry
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DrD
Indeed they do . . . .

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

4 Years Ago

Agreed....
Nice.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

4 Years Ago

:-)
and the circle revolves - very nice

john

Posted 4 Years Ago


Frieda P

4 Years Ago

Thanks john
Short, sweet.,....and so very true!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

4 Years Ago

thanks solioquy, love those angels :-)
soliloquy

4 Years Ago

Me too. Thanks for pointing that out. Very original.
Frieda P

4 Years Ago

They brought a soft smile to my heart. :-)
...And then the cruel nanny takes over!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

4 Years Ago

Aren't we in a spunky mood!? ;-)
DIVYA

4 Years Ago

:)
Very pretty and dreamlike. This was very beautiful.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

4 Years Ago

Thanks Ahmad, think it's a good start for New Year, enjoy yours!
Lovely. Simply beautiful. Such simple and small words yet the portray and impress upon the value of one life, of one child. So it is quite painful to find abortions and abandoned children in our world today. Good piece. ^_^

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

4 Years Ago

Thanks fiery, glad you like it. :-)

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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