COFFEE Senyru

Caffeinated, of course.

COFFEE!  Glorious! 

starts my day off the right way

then, it's all downhill

Reviews

[KAOlmsted]

Why am I always compelled to read anything with the word 'coffee' in the title; I never touch the stuff! I think I'm trying to see if maybe I'm missing out on something. Like, maybe I missed the boat. But what you're saying here, in this Senryu, is, even though the effects of coffee give you some synthetic energy to start the day, it isn't enough to keep you going unless you consume more coffee? Vicious cycle, this. Then again, if I drank some coffee, I might get up from my desk and clean the kitchen...yeah, you can keep the coffee ;-)

Good work, by the way. Really clever write.

[Frieda P]

No problem, I'll drink yours, what do you do drink for breakfast, besides sarcasm? ;-)

[KAOlmsted]

Diet Dr Pepper...duh.

:-D

[Michael G.]

Strong write, like my coffee.
Sometimes I will even have a cup at night, just to end on a high note.

[Jack...]

Ihavehadsixcupsofcoffeethismorningbutthatisok, itdoesn'taffectme.

veryniceoneFrieda

[Frieda P]

manaftermyownheart! ;-)

Thanks.

[quinfinn]

not if you make it Irish coffee! cute, very clever!!!

[Frieda P]

Now you're just teasing me! Thanks quin.

[quinfinn]

i may begin teasing but always finish pleasing....

[Frieda P]

You're a rascal you know? ;-P

[quinfinn]

and then some!

[Rob Santana]

I am not a coffee drinker, although I did drink coffee once about 15 years ago. Well let's say I came outta the restroom filling about ten 10 pounds lighter....yeah coffee can kick rocks!!!

[Frieda P]

I'm not quite sure how one lives without coffee, apparently it can be done...I'm dying for a cup right now!

[Rob Santana]

Go ahead Frieda have a cup. Just one more sip, just one more.....

[Frieda P]

You're cruel Creeper, don't make me write another Senryu about you!

[Rob Santana]

LMAO!!!!! Do it, do it write a really cruel one. Okay okay not cool I know. Gotta go taking my sis to Starbucks!!!!

[Holly Mason]

sorry I ever missed this...the funny thing I was out of coffee this morning so it has been nothing but downhill*)so creative once again and yes caffeinated or why drink it?
thank you for sharing

[Frieda P]

Funny you should find this now Holly, I haven't had coffee in over two days, and going through withdrawal! I hear ya, thanks for reading

[Holly Mason]

no coffee two days ...I will fed-ex some where is it headed?hahha

[Frieda P]

Nah, I've got loads of it, I should send you some...just a bug or something, and my head is banging from caffeine withdrawal....

[Holly Mason]

really sorry you are not feeling well my head loses it if I am out of sugar not a sugaraholic but my head needs it in the morning

[Frieda P]

Thanks Holly, I think it's food poisoning, it's a killer....not much into sugar myself, give me salt and I'm fine.

[Holly Mason]

well when I get a stomach bug I always think..in a few days I will feel really skinny*)

[Frieda P]

Ha, yeah helluva diet eh? ;-)

[Barbara Walker]

Ah, yes...I can't imagine going downhill without it! Of course caffeinated, because what would be the point???? HA1

[Frieda P]

No point at all, so true. Thanks for reading.

[That_Girl]

Coffee, cigarettes, and Monster energy drinks keep me alive. :D

[Frieda P]

Explains a lot....hahahaha ;-)

[That_Girl]

;D

[Clockwork]

It's liquid consciousness for me, especially when in at college. I'm at the point if getting caffeine headaches when I don't drink it. I would line to think the day is a but more promising after the cup though.

[Frieda P]

'Liquid consciousness' I'm stealing that line! Thanks.

[Clockwork]

Haha as long as you scribble my name somewhere ;-)

[DrD]

Making coffee is my first mission of the day. I understand the work all too well.

[Frieda P]

For sure, without it would be mission impossible.

[LeeLee Ryder]

IT's call the Coffee Downhill Express, I take it.
This a good, fun and zappy Senyru we can sip.
Happy '13
LLR

[Frieda P]

ha thanks for sipping my poetry LLR