Married Man

Married Man

A Poem by Frieda P

Married man, why do you entice me so
you promise me beyond the moon and stars
when we both know they're not yours to give
sweep me off my feet, dance me, romance me
pale azure moonlight is so thrilling and inviting
my mind plays a melody, an old tune of betrayal
have lived forsaken, been on the other side of midnight
I say without hesitation, 'sorry, my dance card is replete'
yet, I can't help myself but marvel at what 'could have been.'
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                              


© 2013 Frieda P



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sometimes, our feelings to someone are stronger than our control. let me say, love is sweet but at the same time it learns us how to be selfish. we get selfish when we love someone wanting them to be only for us. we love them to feel selfish twards us as well. this is the fact we try to ignore about love but it is real..
very nicely penned..

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

4 Years Ago

Yes, that makes perfect sense unless you're looking through the eyes of a scorned woman, then sense .. read more



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If this is personal No need to commit to a married man...Chances are if he's done it to her, he would probably do the same to you. Besides who wants to break up a marriage any way. Let them decide on their own without interference.

Posted 4 Years Ago


well,that's life,,,,anyways,don't want to commit to a married man.LOL;)thanks for sharing Madam F

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

4 Years Ago

Hard to do when they're already committed, yep. Thanks hon!
Ah, the temptation may be there, but the consequences are usually that which causes more harm than good! This ole' gal has been around long enough to know it is not a good thing to give in to.......both sides are guilty if it happens. I feel so much compassion for the innocent person, either wife or husband when it does occur!
It is a good topic to write of so that we may think about it - before, of if it does happen! It is better to have a 'could have been' than a 'I am sorry it happened'!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

4 Years Ago

You're not only a lovely woman Sheila you are plenty wise too. Thanks! Sucks being on the losing end.. read more
lol married men need to learn how to behave don't act single you're gonna destroy some poor girl's heart really not cool great poem Freida infatuation empty promises this one had it all in little words keep it up

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

4 Years Ago

Yep happened, I guess that's why I'd think twice before throwing my whims to the wind. The receivin.. read more
I had a UPS guy come to the house today...baby he was gorgeous...and so sweet...doing that thing men do when women come to the door in a t-shirt without a bra on *laugh* He was wearing the prettiest wedding band I ever saw. *sigh* You know, my Brit was married when I met him ;-) I'm just saying...

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

KAOlmsted

4 Years Ago

mmm hmmm...stop it now, I'm trying to get some RRs in before bed ;-)
Frieda P

4 Years Ago

Woke up this morning with a boom boom up my arse, as my sister used to sing it! ;-P Like it much be.. read more
KAOlmsted

4 Years Ago

Ha! Yeah...
This is amazing

Althought Mrs Frieda are you flirting with a married Man??? ;-)

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

4 Years Ago

Moi? Do I look like the flirty type, it's all imagination. ;-)
Lover Of Words

4 Years Ago

Hahaha well you have a great imagination! Surely got me wondering! ;-)
I will never understand why a man or woman would go about "enticing" someone else while married to another. Oh, wait, I guess I am guilty of that too. It comes down to our selfish desire to feel that flush of pleasure that is part of those first few moments of creating a new relationship.

You did very well in capturing the hurt that is brought about by this selfishness.
Thank you for sharing it.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

4 Years Ago

That's what I like, pure unadulterated honesty! Thanks so much, glad you like it Wes
Keith

4 Years Ago

You're welcome :)
hmmm very nice way of capturing this...

forbidden fruit is usually the sweetest- and most deadly

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

4 Years Ago

Tis, there lies the problem! ;-)
Sirius King

4 Years Ago

yupp :-)
Frieda P

4 Years Ago

ha yep ;-)
Looks like this sparked some debate and discussion! That's a good thing, and so was this poem. Too bad I missed out on all the fun.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

4 Years Ago

You missed a lot, someone beat me up over my Senyru too, was an eventful weekend!
Those married men should keep it in their pants and put it away for their wives. :P Another awesome write :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

4 Years Ago

ha that made me laugh! thanks Carolann!
Carolann Dowsett

4 Years Ago

Haha anytime :)

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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