Who's Sorry Now

Who's Sorry Now

A Poem by Frieda P




Who's sorry now
what goes around, comes around
there's talk that she's cheating on you

exactly what you did to me
karma's a b***h and all that s**t
a broken heart...don't get me started

listened to all the love songs
cried me a river and it cried it some more
now put on your head phones and suck it

your cheating heart is gonna smart
when you find out her lover
is none other....



                                        



© 2013 Frieda P



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Haha Karma's a b***h, but oh do I love her. This was an amusing piece and you stabbed him right in the jewels with this one. Respect and Loyalty is basically what one expects, can't provide it.. don't expect to ride it! I love your poetic attacks :D their so badass and although amusing to us, this should hit whoever its aimed at..and hit them hard :) great write :D xoxo

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

KeeD

4 Years Ago

lmao a hit a swing and a near miss .. My poor jewels :P :) you're such a talented writer.
KeeD

4 Years Ago

poem after poem every day I think you write a new one and their all beyond good.. Most defining the .. read more
Frieda P

4 Years Ago

Ha, is that a pick up line or WHAT? ;-P



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Love it!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

4 Years Ago

Thanks Trudi.
I do believe in karma. I paid the price a few times. A very good poem. Most of us had learn the hard way. Nice flow of thoughts with a very good ending. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

4 Years Ago

You naughty naughty boy Coyote! Thanks for the excellent review.
Ha! I think all of us can relate to this, who hasn't wished the worst for the ex who dumped you? Loved the last line too- who could it be, could it be me?

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Frieda P

4 Years Ago

I love that every woman can relate to this but it's so bloody sad really! Thanks Claire...
Yes! This is very good =) What comes around, does indeed go around.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

4 Years Ago

ha one can only hope! ;-)
Tracey C.

4 Years Ago

Right! haha
Frieda P

4 Years Ago

:-D
This happens this happens this happens!
And I am so happy that it does.
Serves everyone right!

The good thing about Madame Karma is that she eventually reaches every one. Now if only she rushed it a bit...

Thank you for writing this poem Frieda!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

4 Years Ago

ha I'm almost positive we were separated at birth my dear friend. ;-)
Thanks you!
DIVYA

4 Years Ago

yes....i now suspect that too ;)
Frieda P

4 Years Ago

:-)
Remind me not to get on your bad side. This is vitriol in buckets with sweet revenge for desert

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

4 Years Ago

You John? How could that even be possible.... ;-)
lol that's funny this guy has probably no nuts left remind me not to upset you ever

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

4 Years Ago

we'll see....
Frieda P

4 Years Ago

ha! just googled it, I got Italian dance classes!! I can do that haahahaha
Deron Alexis

4 Years Ago

sorry try extempo with the e it works sorry :3
Spiteful and vengeful. I like it

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

4 Years Ago

Thanks Baby ;-)
oh my goodness, this is so freaking amazing!
I really like this, amazing write : )

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Frieda P

4 Years Ago

oh my goodness, I love your review! ;-)
...than who?? Oh god, it's not me, is it? *laugh* Wow...I love Karma. Except when that b***h comes for me. Then it's not very funny at all ;-) Great rage here. And more than a little gloating, I'd say. Nice.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

4 Years Ago

ha who else would it be!? ;-)
KAOlmsted

4 Years Ago

I really get around ;-)

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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