Who's Sorry Now

Who's sorry now

what goes around, comes around

there's talk that she's cheating on you

exactly what you did to me

karma's a b***h and all that s**t

a broken heart...don't get me started

listened to all the love songs

cried me a river and it cried it some more

now put on your head phones and suck it

your cheating heart is gonna smart

when you find out her lover

is none other....

                                        

Reviews

[KeeD]

Haha Karma's a b***h, but oh do I love her. This was an amusing piece and you stabbed him right in the jewels with this one. Respect and Loyalty is basically what one expects, can't provide it.. don't expect to ride it! I love your poetic attacks :D their so badass and although amusing to us, this should hit whoever its aimed at..and hit them hard :) great write :D xoxo

[Frieda P]

Haha you gotta get em where it hurts most! Those freaking jewels of yours, well....not your's, in general, you know what I mean, ha...I'm outa here...................grazie!

[KeeD]

lmao a hit a swing and a near miss .. My poor jewels :P :) you're such a talented writer.

[KeeD]

poem after poem every day I think you write a new one and their all beyond good.. Most defining the meaning of great

[Frieda P]

Ha, is that a pick up line or WHAT? ;-P

[Trudi]

Love it!

[Frieda P]

Thanks Trudi.

[Coyote Poetry]

I do believe in karma. I paid the price a few times. A very good poem. Most of us had learn the hard way. Nice flow of thoughts with a very good ending. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Frieda P]

You naughty naughty boy Coyote! Thanks for the excellent review.

[Claire Twinn]

Ha! I think all of us can relate to this, who hasn't wished the worst for the ex who dumped you? Loved the last line too- who could it be, could it be me?

[Frieda P]

I love that every woman can relate to this but it's so bloody sad really! Thanks Claire...

[Tracey C.]

Yes! This is very good =) What comes around, does indeed go around.

[Frieda P]

ha one can only hope! ;-)

[Tracey C.]

Right! haha

[Frieda P]

:-D

[DIVYA]

This happens this happens this happens!
And I am so happy that it does.
Serves everyone right!

The good thing about Madame Karma is that she eventually reaches every one. Now if only she rushed it a bit...

Thank you for writing this poem Frieda!

[Frieda P]

ha I'm almost positive we were separated at birth my dear friend. ;-)
Thanks you!

[DIVYA]

yes....i now suspect that too ;)

[Frieda P]

:-)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Remind me not to get on your bad side. This is vitriol in buckets with sweet revenge for desert

[Frieda P]

You John? How could that even be possible.... ;-)

[Deron Alexis]

lol that's funny this guy has probably no nuts left remind me not to upset you ever

[Frieda P]

oh my, i spit my drink out! ;-)

[Deron Alexis]

lol I don't want to be on the biting end on one of those poems man you know how to hate teach me oh wise dreaded one

[Frieda P]

hahaha STOP you're making my face hurt!!

[Frieda P]

when you least expect it, is when I strike, there may well be a poem about you someday. ;-P

[Deron Alexis]

O.o ima start gathering my lyrics arsenal
that reminds me there's an old art form in my country were guys make up song verses to one beat on the spot made to insult each other its called X tempo you should look it up if you find a really good battle and understand our dialect of English it will be quite entertaining XD

[Frieda P]

geez, you're giving me assignments now! hahaha

[Deron Alexis]

lol no really i think you'll like it you seem like the type to try something new every now and then

[Frieda P]

ha I'll check it out, I can barely speak my own English, I excel at sarcasm, can't I speak that? lol

[Deron Alexis]

I'm working on a different type called a Robber talk this one is way more dark and mystic its based on a lore character we have called midnight robbers closely linked to marauders of European theater art they have talent its a spoken word type deal that they do but always on the darker side of things

[Frieda P]

Color me grey...I will definitely check it out.

[Deron Alexis]

cool its really hard to do though it may take a while :(

[Frieda P]

we'll see....

[Frieda P]

ha! just googled it, I got Italian dance classes!! I can do that haahahaha

[Deron Alexis]

sorry try extempo with the e it works sorry :3

[Baby Ricochet]

Spiteful and vengeful. I like it

[Frieda P]

Thanks Baby ;-)

[rnuff]

oh my goodness, this is so freaking amazing!
I really like this, amazing write : )

[Frieda P]

oh my goodness, I love your review! ;-)

[KAOlmsted]

...than who?? Oh god, it's not me, is it? *laugh* Wow...I love Karma. Except when that b***h comes for me. Then it's not very funny at all ;-) Great rage here. And more than a little gloating, I'd say. Nice.

[Frieda P]

ha who else would it be!? ;-)

[KAOlmsted]

I really get around ;-)