The Joy of Reading

The Joy of Reading

A Poem by Frieda P

I study you
I  devour you like a book
I interpret you in Braille
that tactile feel like fire and ice
your nuances seize my senses
like ice cream freezes the brain

You permeate my soul 
like a sultry breeze of Belize
I breathe you in like
 smoke filled vodka martini bars
intoxicating my thrill sensors to a frenzied shrill
dance me to your inner core of secret lust
make me a prisoner 
of all that  embodies you
wrap around me
 like a serpent seeking that last breath
when I cease to exhale, take me in again

I smoke you like a fine Cuban cigar 
lingering in the lungs
 and smarting the heart
when it's bad, it's oh so completely divine
let me feast
 from your body and spirit
I glory in every inch of your majestic beauty
I dine with gusto
 and lusty abandon
I drink in your essence, I taste you
lick my lips
 of your manliness 
savoring 
every
 last 
drop
 of
 you






© 2013 Frieda P



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This was very erotic. Certainly nothing like the books I read and I have a library! (laughing) I do love the smell of books, their weight in my hand, the adventures and places they take me to. On the shelf beside me sit copies of Ray Bradbury, Mark Twain, Emily Bronte', Charlotte Bronte' (I love those Bronte' women) Daphne du Maurier, Jack London, O Henry, F. Scott Fitzgerald and Rudyard Kipling...but the REAL library is in another room. This sounds more like "The Joy of Sex" by Alex Comfort...a book I've never got around to reading. I'm more of a transcendentalist in that respect. (laughing) This was an excellent steamy read.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

4 Years Ago

Thanks, I figured you liked it cause you're rambling ;-)
Fabian G. Franklin

4 Years Ago

I'm not rambling but commenting more on the title than the content since one is misleading of the ot.. read more
Frieda P

4 Years Ago

that was the point my friend.



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i felt that this was highly imaginative in the way you have included so many differnet kinds of comparisions, and scenarios which I really enjoyed, thanks and I think that your stucturing is sophisicated too

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

4 Years Ago

Thanks so much, really appreciate that critique Sheema.
SHEEMA HUQ

4 Years Ago

You're welcome dear Frieda, infact I feel I should add that, each line consists of inviting manipula.. read more
Frieda P

4 Years Ago

Woooo, now you're making my head spin... ;-)
Okay Keegan has captured my sentiments perfectly here haha My fingers are limp on the keyboard...no further questions, your honor...you know I like this...

Posted 4 Years Ago


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kublakhan27

4 Years Ago

Haha not as messy as I could make it...you're antagonizing my attempts to be coy ;P
Frieda P

4 Years Ago

;-D
kublakhan27

4 Years Ago

;D
A beautiful poem. A talented writer take the reader on a journey and open the door to their imagination. You did. Great description led the reader to a very nice ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

4 Years Ago

Wow, what a great compliment John, thank you kindly my friend!
This was very erotic. Certainly nothing like the books I read and I have a library! (laughing) I do love the smell of books, their weight in my hand, the adventures and places they take me to. On the shelf beside me sit copies of Ray Bradbury, Mark Twain, Emily Bronte', Charlotte Bronte' (I love those Bronte' women) Daphne du Maurier, Jack London, O Henry, F. Scott Fitzgerald and Rudyard Kipling...but the REAL library is in another room. This sounds more like "The Joy of Sex" by Alex Comfort...a book I've never got around to reading. I'm more of a transcendentalist in that respect. (laughing) This was an excellent steamy read.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

4 Years Ago

Thanks, I figured you liked it cause you're rambling ;-)
Fabian G. Franklin

4 Years Ago

I'm not rambling but commenting more on the title than the content since one is misleading of the ot.. read more
Frieda P

4 Years Ago

that was the point my friend.
OoooH! What a tempting way of enjoying him! When do I get my hands on him???? Or should I request you to convince him for me? You are a master!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

4 Years Ago

ha, as if you can't get your own good book. ;-)
Oh wow. So amazing how you write with such passion and sensuality and intent.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

4 Years Ago

Thanks Ahmad, glad you liked it.
please pass the cigarettes. never mind, I'm already smoking.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Frieda P

4 Years Ago

LMAO!!
very well done you made reading sound like sex wow that's allot of love just the same we could never read one book

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Frieda P

4 Years Ago

LMAO!!
I love to read

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Frieda P

4 Years Ago

I bet you do.... ;-)
i also really like how this was formatted and ended with that "last drop" of "you"!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

4 Years Ago

Thanks for that jacob, been working on the formatting aspect, have never really done that before, wh.. read more

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