Claret Addictions

Claret Addictions

A Poem by Frieda P

we mingle breath,
 you bleed me with life 
your sweet essence 

running through
 every vein of my being
you exhale and my chest heaves

you taint me with your fluid
 then lick it from my backbone

weakened by pumping reperations 
 i'm illicit liquid at your feet
your scars deepen my pain

i seek out antidotes for 
this affliction 
to alleviate my addiction 

all for naught

under your spell
  whimsy, death and hallelujah
 
poisonous mushroom
 winds slam into me
when your day turns somber

crimson between us adulterates
me muted granite

 my cry of blood tears
afraid to venture into the realm
 of a time when you cut me out

i exist to transpire...
compulsion of desire overrules
need for my own life supply
breathe your scarlet air
 until the dark tsunami

toxoid venom in the veins
 of lustful anticipations
for now i'll sip your blood
 and languish

 in the pools of your desires
under your spell 
of fatal attraction
till you cut/

 the bane
 of my

 existence

© 2013 Frieda P



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Frieda P

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Photo, music and words were amazing.
"poisonous mushroom
winds slam into me
when your day turns somber"
Funny how poetry had turn to vision and sound. My next step will be you tube. I like the way you led the reading in this poem. I like the closing line. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

4 Years Ago

And I'm loving this review, thanks Coyote.



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very well said

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Frieda P

4 Years Ago

Thanks for reading me stephen.
Photo, music and words were amazing.
"poisonous mushroom
winds slam into me
when your day turns somber"
Funny how poetry had turn to vision and sound. My next step will be you tube. I like the way you led the reading in this poem. I like the closing line. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

4 Years Ago

And I'm loving this review, thanks Coyote.
i just started reading your writing, and might i say you are brilliant. This was dark, and it echos painful desire, wanting what is causing you anguish. I really love this, thanks for sharing

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

4 Years Ago

Thanks for reading... I'm jazzing on your review to say the least!
creativequill

4 Years Ago

good :)
Frieda P

4 Years Ago

:-)
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well this is very waxy Wichita, with swords and the tv in the background playing dark shadows, i love the dark overtones you implode into, the sex is a beast to taunting with feverish thrusts, you bust through climax at the end like the lubrication of rust, only one whom thinks inside your realms of existence can really attune the atonement used...great piece

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

4 Years Ago

for sure, i'm in lust with words...did I say thank you muchly
writing mojo

4 Years Ago

you always do...with the words you chose
Frieda P

4 Years Ago

;-)
I first thought this was going to be dirty...sexy? But no..it is so much more. Human love lust and emotion mixed up in poisoned confusion of bodily fluid and blood. We love to live...but sometimes we die by loving too much.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

4 Years Ago

Okay that just blew my skirt up! ;-)
+she plays with matches+

4 Years Ago

Don't you love those Marilyn Monroe moments?
Frieda P

4 Years Ago

Ha... now she's my idol!
oooh a, i see that you have entered the horror/thriller genre with great skill, well done

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

4 Years Ago

Ha I guess you could say I have! Thanks so much for reading Sheema
Are all irresistible ones invariably dark internally...or is it my sole opinion? Coz they leave a trail of tears and pain almost every time.

A greatly sexy poem but full of the promise of pain.
My compliments to you for the complete portrayal of the agony ecstasy relationship. 100/100

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

4 Years Ago

Doing a happy dance, thanks so much Divya, I do love when someone grasps the madness of my words. F.. read more
DIVYA

4 Years Ago

That's because we live on the same pages Frieda! ;)
And you are always welcome! :)
Frieda P

4 Years Ago

Perhaps we need a new shiny notebook my friend... ;-)
You my dear have been watching too many vampire and zombie movies lol! It reads well but I find if difficult and I cannot agree with much of the sentiment.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

4 Years Ago

I've not seen a vampire movie....read between the lines John.
Cool. Red wine is truly intoxicating . . . especially when you're in love. Sounds like this is a marvelous vintage

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Frieda P

4 Years Ago

Intoxicating to say the least....thanks Kailer
You are very good at letting you r emotions known in every peice you write this is just beautiful!! I mean the writer Is you!!! :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lover Of Words

4 Years Ago

Your welcome!!!!!
Frieda P

4 Years Ago

;-)
Lover Of Words

4 Years Ago

;-)

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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