Code Blue

Code Blue

A Poem by Frieda P
"

Blue shoe Senyru

"
Judgmental people

need to walk in shoe's blue taint

bend over and blow

© 2013 Frieda P


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Some people are like Jackals, Cunning, deceptive and judgmental in their ways. Never mean well from the heart, just mean to take what is theirs and then depart. So like you put it so clearly here, F**k them, can't judge a writer by his life ~ Cause Writers really live through their writing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks Kee, you're always so kind...xo



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I think if I weren't judged I would feel out of sorts.. Something in my life would be off.. Love it..xo

Posted 11 Years Ago


yes out that arse...

Posted 11 Years Ago


Ah, f**k 'em. let 'em judge. They only make themselves look stupid.

Unless you're talking about me...then, well, you know...f**k off and all that jazz XD

Love it, Frieda...and so damn true.



Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

KAOlmsted

11 Years Ago

xD
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

gawd I love you to pieces!
KAOlmsted

11 Years Ago

Me too you...but make mine Reece's pieces ;-)
Don't let anyone get you down. They must be jealous that your better than them :) Keep your head held high doll, we all love you forever!

Another great write. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

s y e

11 Years Ago

;-D
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

that was my *smug* face ;-)
s y e

11 Years Ago

I figured ;) You got your very own noodles bahahahahahaha
I know you mean something entirely different from where my mind only wants to dwell upon.
It's basketball season, and Carolina/Duke is on the mind... both wearing blue.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

ha yes, blue is not always blue ;-)
people talk out of their a*s when they have not lived a particular situation. It's easier to spout rhetoric and book facts if one has not lived it.



Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Exactly, thank you LA, it's as though telling someone who's just lost a loved one to 'get over it'.... read more
And as a mental people, I so appreciate you not judging me :-)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Never! I may have a big sarcastic mouth, but it's never judgmental, unless you're a guy wearing a th.. read more
Distant horizons

11 Years Ago

or a mankini :-)
Some people are like Jackals, Cunning, deceptive and judgmental in their ways. Never mean well from the heart, just mean to take what is theirs and then depart. So like you put it so clearly here, F**k them, can't judge a writer by his life ~ Cause Writers really live through their writing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks Kee, you're always so kind...xo
LOL! :))))
They need a good.....!

Great poem Frieda! I love it!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Frieda P

11 Years Ago

;-D Thanks doll!
DIVYA

11 Years Ago

welcome Frieda! :)

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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