Forbidden Fruit

EVEn Senyru

You'll lose every time,

 pointing the finger at us

 We still bare the fruit

Reviews

[Tarry Franck]

love it and I agree - love the last line :)

[Frieda P]

I had forgotten about this one, thanks Tarry! ;-)

[Tarry Franck]

I'm so far behind on reviewing - I'm trying to catch up :)

[Frieda P]

I hear you...no problemo, glad you made it in ;-)

[Tarry Franck]

Me too

[InsanityWriter]

Love it. ;)

[Frieda P]

Thanks Skittles ;-)

[Sanjana.N.D]

amazing!!! nice.....i like the last line...:)

[Frieda P]

Thank you muchly! ;-)

[Neville]

The rudiments of senyru
leave me speechless
though I still produce seeds

Good one and yes, boys are silly

N

[Frieda P]

Was that a come on? ha ;-)

[Neville]

Maybe!

[Frieda P]

Ha!

[Neville]

Hum! was that a turn down;.)

[Frieda P]

ha yes, I stay about from seeds these days, been implanted 3 times!! ;-)

[Richard John Davis]

love it

[Frieda P]

Thanks ;-)

[KAOlmsted]

Good one. Boys are silly.

[Frieda P]

Very, so are men. ;-)

[KAOlmsted]

Honey, at my age, they're all boys ;-) (Oh look...a Neville who actually agrees with me...my Brit --named Neville-- seldom does) xD

[Frieda P]

ha I pictured you in your finest Mae West voice! ;-P

[KAOlmsted]

xD You know it!

[Frieda P]

ha I knew it!

[Lover Of Words]

Phahahhahaha....

[Frieda P]

;-D

[Lover Of Words]

;P

[LA Lorena]

chuckling into my coffee cup, smiling to myself.

[Frieda P]

ha every woman gets it...i'm switching the I to WE ;-)

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the ending. Honest and direct quote. Thank you.
Coyote

[Frieda P]

True story Coyote ;-)

[s y e]

Hahahaha. Made me laugh, just what I needed. Haha, nice mama F
Loved it as always. Well done!

[Frieda P]

ha, you like when my cherries are in a twist, eh? LOL ;-)

[s y e]

Hahaha, absolutely doll ;-) looks like your twisted cherries bring an 'oomph' out ;-P

[Frieda P]

Depends sometimes on who's doing the twisting! ha ;-)

[s y e]

Bahahaha ;-) I bet!

[Frieda P]

'Did the sleep fairy help you get some zzz's?

[s y e]

Yes I did thanks