You Move Me

You Move Me

A Poem by Frieda P
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A very lovely woman I've met here sent me this photo, I was moved by it, read it as you wish.

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Awe struck... 
        by the beauty of
        your light
       all the colors of passion
 swept me away
to a mystical place
 in my soul's sight

Fire and ice
 rapturous entanglements
weaving and staking
 its claim in space
I see the wonderment
     of a child's' laughter

The dignity of royalty,
 the fight for life,
tearful cries of joy
 and blissful encounters
a newborn life
   that explodes onto this earth
           crimson that connects
 our lifeblood and ardor

  Fierceness of a lioness 
         protecting her cubs
honesty and true blue
          dedication with fervor
majestic moutains
            of pride and grace

A safe place to rest
 the weary head at peace
  I see all these colors
          that shade your luster
it shapes my world
            glistens my hope 
     and moves my being

© 2013 Frieda P



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Only someone with a beautiful heart and spirit could have written this poem....You...your heart...and the words that you spill...Sometimes its hard to see the rainbow through dark glasses....such a tender piece that reaches into the depths....
I think this one is very telling and very well done......I thank you for the share....and for being so special....:)

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

4 Years Ago

That is quite a compliment coming from you Angel, one who writes such constant beauty in her work..... read more



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I need to say something candidly and then I will never say anything even remotely close to this again...you know I like olive juice in my martini, right?

Posted 4 Years Ago


Both are amazing! I enjoyed. ^_^ Thanks for sharing! :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

4 Years Ago

Thanks Skittle, happy that you enjoyed it. ;-)
Only someone with a beautiful heart and spirit could have written this poem....You...your heart...and the words that you spill...Sometimes its hard to see the rainbow through dark glasses....such a tender piece that reaches into the depths....
I think this one is very telling and very well done......I thank you for the share....and for being so special....:)

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

4 Years Ago

That is quite a compliment coming from you Angel, one who writes such constant beauty in her work..... read more
This speaks volumes to me of strength, beauty, and dignity,very eloquently expressed. Nice write!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

4 Years Ago

Thanks so much Mark, glad you enjoyed it.
Wow! This is brilliant!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

4 Years Ago

Wow, thanks for this lovely review Rashmi.
Rashmi Kulal

4 Years Ago

You deserve it! :)
A very solid write. This shows how well your imagination is working. Nice picture.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

4 Years Ago

At least something's still working. ;-)
Thanks Michael.
wow, that picture is awesome! :-O WOAH!
Nicely written!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

s y e

4 Years Ago

Thats the way uh huh uh huh I like it uh huh uh huh xP
Frieda P

4 Years Ago

;-D
s y e

4 Years Ago

xD
you are always surprising me with your ability to write about all life aspects. another wonderful poem..

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

4 Years Ago

Lol, it's not?
khalid

4 Years Ago

it is not a compliment! it is the truth..
Frieda P

4 Years Ago

Oh, ha, I thought maybe it meant something different where you're from ;-)
Beautiful...=)

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

4 Years Ago

Thanks so much David, I felt this one...glad you liked it! ;-)
Wow. This poem is insanely diverse. You can pull a few interpretations out at once. That makes this piece a success. And I love that you used "ardor" and "fervor"; those were in my Frankenstein vocabulary. It's nice to see them reused in a pretty poem.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

4 Years Ago

Thanks Anna, I was hoping that's the reader would see a few interpretation's, your review made me sm.. read more

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Tags: awe, beauty, wonder, hope, friendship

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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