Communion of Poetry

Communion of Poetry

A Poem by Frieda P

This ceremonial ritual speaks only truth, exalting wings of reality                                                         basking religiously in your whorish afterglow, 
              I ingest your sins and feast on them like a gluttonous harlot

Nourishment from your host feeds my passion,
                     I drink you like wine in gulps of insanity
        it courses through my veins, a fluid, rhythmical tonic

 I exhale, the smoke clears to see another moon rise
          you came within me forcefully as my soul arched to the sun
               chants of reckless echoes filled the skies

              This communion branded me with fever
     calculated sketching of quotes from the universe
               a stippled tear and an engraved smile my sword 

I plunge into you with the abandon of a lusty courtesan 
                 you etch onto me as you dip your quill to pen this sacrament,
       bleeding an exuberant cornucopia of enlightened words 

                          ...spoken by endless sacred poets





© 2013 Frieda P



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"Nourishment from your host feeds my passion,
I drink you like wine in gulps of insanity
it courses through my veins, a fluid, rhythmical tonic"
A beautiful poem. The above lines are amazing. Poetry should take us to better places. The great Poet's left sacred poetry. Now it is our turn. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote



Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

4 Years Ago

Thanks for this great review John, much appreciated.



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Well written, keep up the good work.

Posted 9 Months Ago


"Nourishment from your host feeds my passion,
I drink you like wine in gulps of insanity
it courses through my veins, a fluid, rhythmical tonic"
A beautiful poem. The above lines are amazing. Poetry should take us to better places. The great Poet's left sacred poetry. Now it is our turn. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote



Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

4 Years Ago

Thanks for this great review John, much appreciated.
Standing... applauding!

"Bravo."

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

4 Years Ago

Thrilled you liked this one Michael, thank you.
beautiful.. rich and deep... thats a frieda p poem

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Frieda P

4 Years Ago

Thanks so much N!LoC
I can`t say more than Quin, Mistress Poet. It would be gilding the lily. At various times, I`ve read poetry to sixth-formers( don`t know what you`d call `em. Sophomores?) trying to browbeat them into realisation that poetry is the ultimate communicative art for everyone. I wish I`d had your poem to blast `em with! P.

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Frieda P

4 Years Ago

Not sure you can beat that notion into anyone, it's either in your soul or not...thanks Pete.
I need communion after reading this :D my mind is filled with bad intentions for the author of this poem is a maestro! Awesome stuff Miss P. Sinfully tasteful.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

4 Years Ago

Haha you're too cute Kee, thanks ;-) x
The ecstacy of the pen oozes from each syllable in this piece. You have effortlessly turned the art of writing and collaborating into a state of unadulterated passion. It's mystical and ethereal and sublime. I truly loved the romance you have rendered here. :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Frieda P

4 Years Ago

Oh my Amber, I'm in love with every single one of those adjectives, thanks so much, glad you enjoyed.. read more
Avocations of Amber

4 Years Ago

It was lovely....as always. :)
I plunge into you with the abandon of a lusty courtesan

you etch onto me as you dip your quill to pen this sacrament,

bleeding an exuberant cornucopia of enlightened words

In otherwords...a good ego trip?

Luv you Frieda.


;)

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

4 Years Ago

Wow, thanks for visiting my page and this lovely review, I like your quirky pen name btw...
+she plays with matches+

4 Years Ago

:)
This poem has such lust, zest and vigor. It's awesome. You have injected great energy into it Frieda. The man eater is out and they who are intended beware. She'll leave bloody smoking trails and devatstaion in her path!

Awesome!

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Frieda P

4 Years Ago

Ha you're going to make the guys afraid of me Divya lol, thanks so much! :-)
DIVYA

4 Years Ago

;) You are welcome Frieda!
Another masterful and beautiful piece. I am struck to the core by your imagery and your wording/phrasing. I feel satiated by your words here; healed and consumed at the same time in an odd way. I'm left wondering...and that is a delight.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

4 Years Ago

Wow Friday, thank you kindly for this generous review, much appreciated.

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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