Communion of Poetry

This ceremonial ritual speaks only truth, exalting wings of reality                                                         basking religiously in your whorish afterglow, 

              I ingest your sins and feast on them like a gluttonous harlot

Nourishment from your host feeds my passion,

                     I drink you like wine in gulps of insanity

        it courses through my veins, a fluid, rhythmical tonic

 I exhale, the smoke clears to see another moon rise

          you came within me forcefully as my soul arched to the sun

               chants of reckless echoes filled the skies

              This communion branded me with fever

     calculated sketching of quotes from the universe

               a stippled tear and an engraved smile my sword 

I plunge into you with the abandon of a lusty courtesan 

                 you etch onto me as you dip your quill to pen this sacrament,

       bleeding an exuberant cornucopia of enlightened words 

                          ...spoken by endless sacred poets

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

"Nourishment from your host feeds my passion,
I drink you like wine in gulps of insanity
it courses through my veins, a fluid, rhythmical tonic"
A beautiful poem. The above lines are amazing. Poetry should take us to better places. The great Poet's left sacred poetry. Now it is our turn. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Frieda P]

Thanks for this great review John, much appreciated.

[Terohime]

Well written, keep up the good work.

[Michael G.]

Standing... applauding!

"Bravo."

[Frieda P]

Thrilled you liked this one Michael, thank you.

[N!LoC]

beautiful.. rich and deep... thats a frieda p poem

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much N!LoC

[Pete Langley]

I can`t say more than Quin, Mistress Poet. It would be gilding the lily. At various times, I`ve read poetry to sixth-formers( don`t know what you`d call `em. Sophomores?) trying to browbeat them into realisation that poetry is the ultimate communicative art for everyone. I wish I`d had your poem to blast `em with! P.

[Frieda P]

Not sure you can beat that notion into anyone, it's either in your soul or not...thanks Pete.

[KeeD]

I need communion after reading this :D my mind is filled with bad intentions for the author of this poem is a maestro! Awesome stuff Miss P. Sinfully tasteful.

[Frieda P]

Haha you're too cute Kee, thanks ;-) x

[Avocations of Amber]

The ecstacy of the pen oozes from each syllable in this piece. You have effortlessly turned the art of writing and collaborating into a state of unadulterated passion. It's mystical and ethereal and sublime. I truly loved the romance you have rendered here. :)

[Frieda P]

Oh my Amber, I'm in love with every single one of those adjectives, thanks so much, glad you enjoyed this one! ;-)

[Avocations of Amber]

It was lovely....as always. :)

[Muse]

I plunge into you with the abandon of a lusty courtesan

you etch onto me as you dip your quill to pen this sacrament,

bleeding an exuberant cornucopia of enlightened words

In otherwords...a good ego trip?

Luv you Frieda.


;)

[Frieda P]

Wow, thanks for visiting my page and this lovely review, I like your quirky pen name btw...

[Muse]

:)

[DIVYA]

This poem has such lust, zest and vigor. It's awesome. You have injected great energy into it Frieda. The man eater is out and they who are intended beware. She'll leave bloody smoking trails and devatstaion in her path!

Awesome!

[Frieda P]

Ha you're going to make the guys afraid of me Divya lol, thanks so much! :-)

[DIVYA]

;) You are welcome Frieda!

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Another masterful and beautiful piece. I am struck to the core by your imagery and your wording/phrasing. I feel satiated by your words here; healed and consumed at the same time in an odd way. I'm left wondering...and that is a delight.

[Frieda P]

Wow Friday, thank you kindly for this generous review, much appreciated.