Communion of Poetry

Communion of Poetry

A Poem by Frieda P

This ceremonial ritual speaks only truth, exalting wings of reality                                                         basking religiously in your whorish afterglow, 
              I ingest your sins and feast on them like a gluttonous harlot

Nourishment from your host feeds my passion,
                     I drink you like wine in gulps of insanity
        it courses through my veins, a fluid, rhythmical tonic

 I exhale, the smoke clears to see another moon rise
          you came within me forcefully as my soul arched to the sun
               chants of reckless echoes filled the skies

              This communion branded me with fever
     calculated sketching of quotes from the universe
               a stippled tear and an engraved smile my sword 

I plunge into you with the abandon of a lusty courtesan 
                 you etch onto me as you dip your quill to pen this sacrament,
       bleeding an exuberant cornucopia of enlightened words 

                          ...spoken by endless sacred poets





© 2013 Frieda P



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"Nourishment from your host feeds my passion,
I drink you like wine in gulps of insanity
it courses through my veins, a fluid, rhythmical tonic"
A beautiful poem. The above lines are amazing. Poetry should take us to better places. The great Poet's left sacred poetry. Now it is our turn. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote



Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

4 Years Ago

Thanks for this great review John, much appreciated.



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wonderful as ever....don't you get bored turning out all this great poetry?

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

4 Years Ago

Ha no...don't you? ;-)
Holly water my arse. You are just one randy b***h lol!
Seriously, this is as always so full of feeling and passion expressed in a divinity of Catholic words

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

4 Years Ago

Lol now was that nice?! Randy better be good! ;-P
Loved the poem and its supposed meaning~ Great job and keep working wonders

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

4 Years Ago

Thrilled you did Rhianne, thanks so much.
Rhianne Ney

4 Years Ago

You're welcome
Reading your pieces always take me in trance. The imagery on this one made me delirious. Absolutely wow.


Posted 4 Years Ago


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Frieda P

4 Years Ago

Ooo a trance, I like that! Thanks gabrielle :-)
-bows down to you-

Loved it. It was so amazingly well written. ..... you are honestly the Queen at what you do!

Posted 4 Years Ago


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s y e

4 Years Ago

Shut yer gob! xo
Frieda P

4 Years Ago

Lol off with her head! ;-P
s y e

4 Years Ago

lmao!
Imagery beyond compare! You baptise us with holy water wrung from your pen. I have knelt at the altar of your words and my soul has been renewed. Your poetry is much like a religious experience. Beautiful!

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Frieda P

4 Years Ago

Ha that wasn't holy water hun! ;-P
redflutterby

4 Years Ago

Oops I've committed sacrilege.... I must go to confession now. Repent of my wanton soul.... ;-p

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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