Backstabbing Senryu

Backstabbing Senryu

A Poem by Frieda P


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Cut by SWORD or POETRY

either way you bleed





© 2013 Frieda P



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Frieda P
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Oops. Those be bloody words, dear buddy, though clever as ever. Sharp, cutting - defensive attack.. tis possible. Better now, maybe, hopefully cathartic?

Posted 5 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

a bloody death
...poets can be butchers

nice on Frieda

Posted 5 Years Ago


ouch...that blade is sharp..so is the pen.

Posted 5 Years Ago


that captcha made me laugh out loud like a drugged up horse. nice senryu though. i'm sure the person who you wrote this about will get the s**t kicked out of them by lady karma.

Posted 5 Years Ago


You're a senuyr warrior, Frieda!

Posted 5 Years Ago


Words hurt more than anything... Well to me anyway.....

Posted 5 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

s y e

5 Years Ago

I plan to if it ever comes up!
redflutterby

5 Years Ago

I know because I once kicked a jerk there who was acting like a horses a*s.. he stopped talking pret.. read more
s y e

5 Years Ago

Hahaha, wish I could have seen!
Simularities can happen... even subjects of one leading to others' thoughts. Senryu are 17 syllables traditionally - hence wordings are tight. Two posted one day, so the same - so different. One was humor, the other Anger.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

5 Years Ago

S**t happens...
Did you read Quinfin's poem, or did he read yours?

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

5 Years Ago

Quin? Last i heard he was named Wolf, He wanted to get romantically involved Marie, and I told him .. read more
Marie

5 Years Ago

Quin went through several disguises, but he's back tobeing hiself, I guess. Your poems were similar,.. read more
Frieda P

5 Years Ago

I assume you're one of the friends he hasn't blocked, you should ask him.
Many will try to cross greatness, but she's a lady who wears heels and knows her way around poetry. Stab, stab, stab you may, she'll never bleed out.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

5 Years Ago

Ha the red ones! ;-)
Oh yes words can hurt just as much if not more that a physical confrontation.
Very nicely put Moonbeam.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

5 Years Ago

Thanks Dale, especially when they're totally misconstrued.
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

5 Years Ago

My pleasure moonbeam... and you are right.

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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