Backstabbing Senryu

Backstabbing Senryu

A Poem by Frieda P

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Cut by SWORD or POETRY

either way you bleed




© 2013 Frieda P


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Frieda P
captcha-bellower

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Oops. Those be bloody words, dear buddy, though clever as ever. Sharp, cutting - defensive attack.. tis possible. Better now, maybe, hopefully cathartic?

Posted 10 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

a bloody death
...poets can be butchers

nice on Frieda

Posted 10 Years Ago


ouch...that blade is sharp..so is the pen.

Posted 10 Years Ago


that captcha made me laugh out loud like a drugged up horse. nice senryu though. i'm sure the person who you wrote this about will get the s**t kicked out of them by lady karma.

Posted 10 Years Ago


You're a senuyr warrior, Frieda!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Words hurt more than anything... Well to me anyway.....

Posted 10 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

s y e

10 Years Ago

I plan to if it ever comes up!
redflutterby

10 Years Ago

I know because I once kicked a jerk there who was acting like a horses a*s.. he stopped talking pret.. read more
s y e

10 Years Ago

Hahaha, wish I could have seen!
Simularities can happen... even subjects of one leading to others' thoughts. Senryu are 17 syllables traditionally - hence wordings are tight. Two posted one day, so the same - so different. One was humor, the other Anger.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

S**t happens...
Did you read Quinfin's poem, or did he read yours?

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Quin? Last i heard he was named Wolf, He wanted to get romantically involved Marie, and I told him .. read more
Marie

10 Years Ago

Quin went through several disguises, but he's back tobeing hiself, I guess. Your poems were similar,.. read more
Frieda P

10 Years Ago

I assume you're one of the friends he hasn't blocked, you should ask him.
Many will try to cross greatness, but she's a lady who wears heels and knows her way around poetry. Stab, stab, stab you may, she'll never bleed out.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Ha the red ones! ;-)
Oh yes words can hurt just as much if not more that a physical confrontation.
Very nicely put Moonbeam.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Thanks Dale, especially when they're totally misconstrued.
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

10 Years Ago

My pleasure moonbeam... and you are right.

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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