STOP THE INSANITY!!!

STOP THE INSANITY!!!

A Poem by Frieda P
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just a bit of nonsense to quell the fires

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Let's stop this in house cafe bickering
I suggest a food fight instead...
getting smacked upside the head
doesn't hurt half as bad as what's been said
it only leaves a bad taste in the mouth
let's get back to the joy of writing what's in our noggin
instead of letting all that raw sewage seep out
now that will surely whet your appetite 
& no taste left for food, 
sooo, here's to tomatoes in your face &
margaritas poured over your head
watch out for that flying dog!

© 2013 Frieda P


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Frieda P

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This is priceless Frieda! Would that be grand, to hurl food full pace at the people who manage to anger us most! (Usually the ones we love and live with!) The final three lines reminded me of Tom&Jerry, in addition to your comical hot dog picture the "wacky races" kind of image came rushing into my head! Very fun and full of energy Frieda, this shows that all poetry can be great, even if it does not have incredible depth! Great work! :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Thanks Willow, glad you enjoyed it :-)



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Nicely done. I guess I should be grateful that being busy with work has kept me away form here for a while.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Great write, Frieda. In spite of the humor, i guess i have to count myself lucky to have missed out on cafe bickering thus far. Who ever they are, I hope they got a good laugh out of this gem.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)

10 Years Ago

Then we make for an interesting pair. haha
Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Hmm that's more than a 'pair' hahaha
Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)

10 Years Ago

Touche'... we'll have to do a head count one of these days. lol
Nice! It'd be great if we could all sop fighting... Especially over stupid stuff.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Ah but than there goes all the drama, thanks Skittles :-)
InsanityWriter

10 Years Ago

XD Quite true. ;)
Frieda P

10 Years Ago

I know ;-)
Lol, this was simply hilarious. Great job. :D

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Thanks Rhea, glad you're laughing :-D
I feel the same way Frieda, hence my "Why do we fight?" This is the genuine article, a voice that has something to say, and uses great humor to soothe the masses, like accidentally getting some of that margarita in the mouth and seeing that dog land in the hot girls cleavage. There's a small typo here Frieda,
"sooo, here't to tomatoes in your face"

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Ha it serves you well...........
Astro

10 Years Ago

Thanks....I guess. :)
Frieda P

10 Years Ago

;-) ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Ha ha, cute :) now that's some creativity.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

I had something else in my head but it turned out funny, that silly muse ;-)
One of my favorite songs! A nice tongue in cheek piece that's all too relevant as of late!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Yep, another loose cannon gone bi-polar.... I should have played the music louder, thanks Luke!
Cool Handless Luke

10 Years Ago

You can't play that song loud enough! I don't have a great voice but if that one comes on you are go.. read more
Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Haha same here, if we sang together we could scare the shyte out of everyone I guess, that might wor.. read more
You're so right as you have emphatically expressed in both poetry and hot dog animation. Drama kills creativity. Just because there're different ways of saying the same thing doesn't mean that one way is better than another. Every mapping leads to the same destination.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

One would think, but the nattering continues, thanks for stopping by Aethereal.
Food fight huh....I'm bringing strawberry pie covered in whipped cream. You better duck.... Ha!!! Good one ..... Made me think of the movie Animal House!! x

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Oh I can think of better things to do with that Lol..yep that's why John Belushi is the avatar! x
redflutterby

10 Years Ago

Bahaha.....don't tempt me hun. You know how my mind works... ;-pp
Another poem against the conflict of the site, looks like there is still some unrest. I love the line "let's get back to the joy of writing what's in our noggin." Spoken so true, and I'm totally up to throw some hotdogs to end the conflict :D. Nice write Frieda P.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Mustard & relish or ketchup? Thanks....

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Added on June 22, 2013
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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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