Violins & Lover's Sighs

Violins & Lover's Sighs

A Poem by Frieda P
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Collaboration with the Master of Music & Romance~Jack.

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Violins and lover's sighs
your music struck me like a thunderbolt concerto

charming was your repertoire
it left me breathless on the dance floor

I floated enchanted to your harmony
won my heart so easily in your haunting beat

Strings were taut for a firm tango
you dipped into me with a hot tempo

Breathing in chorus'd composition
an overture of bliss echoes our heartbeat


You play me all night long like an orchestrated Maestro
I bend to your chords with lusty allegro

As skin serenades skin
And ariose shadows move in time upon the wall

The rush in your instrument was intense
the euphony strummed us to rhythmic rapture

You transpose me upon your prelude 
soothing within a moonlit sonnet

The building crescendo of encore moans
came perfectly tuned with the pulsating ovation 





© 2013 Frieda P



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A superb coalition here and the theme is just great as a musical person the theme is right up my street. Its hard to tell where Frieda stops and Jack begins and vice versa so Im happy to stop trying to look for such and just really enjoy this poem by 'Jackieda' or is 'Frijack'
Great work you two


Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jack...

4 Years Ago

Ok, sheesh (wotd) I will settle for Frieja.
Frieda P

4 Years Ago

Sheesh you're easy. ;-)
ANTO

4 Years Ago

"You gotta know when to hold them...know when to fold them.....dah,dah,dah,dah,dah"
lol



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Really Frieda this is getting so embarrasing when you write about me like this in front of everyone! sheesh. Seriously, beautiful music dancing about in here, and the way you have captured that connection of souls is very lovely.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Corset

3 Years Ago

would love one! (or ten)
Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Perhaps the bottle and a straw would do the job haha
Corset

3 Years Ago

even better
A superb coalition here and the theme is just great as a musical person the theme is right up my street. Its hard to tell where Frieda stops and Jack begins and vice versa so Im happy to stop trying to look for such and just really enjoy this poem by 'Jackieda' or is 'Frijack'
Great work you two


Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jack...

4 Years Ago

Ok, sheesh (wotd) I will settle for Frieja.
Frieda P

4 Years Ago

Sheesh you're easy. ;-)
ANTO

4 Years Ago

"You gotta know when to hold them...know when to fold them.....dah,dah,dah,dah,dah"
lol
I loved Violen its simply amazing instrument to peel off your pain
You narrated this wonderfully Frieda :)
Simply amazing :)
- Singh :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

4 Years Ago

Thanks Singh, but half the credit goes to Jack too... :-)
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fine use of couplets here, as ever, Frieda puts her work together excellently

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

4 Years Ago

Friijack as Antnee so aptly put it, thanks Leslie.
Great use of musical innuendo. This one resonates in the core more than in the mind but anything that makes the reader feel is solid in my eyes. Way to go guys.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

4 Years Ago

Hey, I'm all for the core, best compliment ever, thanks Astro!
Astro

4 Years Ago

You're welcome Frieda.
A wonderful collaboration between the two of you. Most certainly has ellements of you both. Once again nicely flowing piece that sang to me as I read this. Just wonderful.
Regards
Troy

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

4 Years Ago

Thanks for this great review Troy, so nice when you hear the poetry sing....
ehhhhh!!!!! just wow!!! This is so beautiful, stunning, amazing, all the words you could use to explain a good thing.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

4 Years Ago

Woooo Cassie, jazzed you enjoyed it!
Great work guys. Lots of frolicking fun.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

4 Years Ago

Grazie Pryde, it was a lot of fun doing this collaboration with Jack, glad you enjoyed it.
Well, I am gabberflasted. My gabber has never been so flasted. What a striking collaboration. I am at a loss to see who contributed what. And that is always the sign of a good collected effort. Well done both.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

4 Years Ago

Love when we can flast your gabber! Thanks Ken. ;-)
Awesome, mindblowing, sensational - music played here Frieda and Jack. Your collaborations are so breathtaking always. They never cease to amaze and excite. Keep writing and giving us such wonders always.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

4 Years Ago

So jazzed you liked our collaboration Divya, we had a blast.

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