Violins & Lover's Sighs

Collaboration with the Master of Music & Romance~Jack.

Violins and lover's sighs

your music struck me like a thunderbolt concerto

charming was your repertoire

it left me breathless on the dance floor

I floated enchanted to your harmony

won my heart so easily in your haunting beat

Strings were taut for a firm tango

you dipped into me with a hot tempo

Breathing in chorus'd composition

an overture of bliss echoes our heartbeat

You play me all night long like an orchestrated Maestro

I bend to your chords with lusty allegro

As skin serenades skin

And ariose shadows move in time upon the wall

The rush in your instrument was intense

the euphony strummed us to rhythmic rapture

You transpose me upon your prelude 

soothing within a moonlit sonnet

The building crescendo of encore moans

came perfectly tuned with the pulsating ovation 

Author's Note

Reviews

[ANTO]

A superb coalition here and the theme is just great as a musical person the theme is right up my street. Its hard to tell where Frieda stops and Jack begins and vice versa so Im happy to stop trying to look for such and just really enjoy this poem by 'Jackieda' or is 'Frijack'
Great work you two

[Frieda P]

Laughing, you know I'm going to go with Friijack! Thanks my lovely friend, jazzed you enjoyed it. x

[ANTO]

I knew it as soon as I typed that .....lol
X

[Frieda P]

Ha you know me too well. ;-) x

[Jack...]

I don't know, I'm kind of partial to Jackieda. It has a nice ring to it.

[Frieda P]

Don't make me block you Jack! ;-)

[ANTO]

I wonder how Brangelina sorted theirs out..? ;)

[Frieda P]

Big bucks I'd imagine! Lol

[Jack...]

Then I'd be known as Blockieda. Still sounds good.

[Frieda P]

More like Friiblock!!

[Jack...]

Ok, sheesh (wotd) I will settle for Frieja.

[Frieda P]

Sheesh you're easy. ;-)

[ANTO]

"You gotta know when to hold them...know when to fold them.....dah,dah,dah,dah,dah"
lol

[Ravyne Hawke]

beautiful!.. I wrote a similar poem using musical terms, but this is so much lovelier. I love your way with language.

[Frieda P]

Thanks Lori, much appreciated.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Nice metaphors. This is an excellent piece- imagine Frieda plus Jack...wow!
Something sensual and every word really strikes.
I enjoyed this product of two amazing poets. Great!

[Frieda P]

You can't go wrong with the master of romance working along side of you, thanks Dhye, jazzed you enjoyed our collaboration!

[Jack...]

Dhaye, to write with someone of Frieda's talents is a gift of a lifetime. I had so much fun writing this with her and I am so glad you enjoyed it.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Right, Jack. Both of you are really great.

[Onyia-Ali, Kingsley Chu..]

You created a very nice metaphor of violin.

I appreciated this line
You play me all night long like an orchestrated Maestro

[Frieda P]

Thanks muchly Onyia, I wrote that line and Jack perfected it with 'orchestrated'....much appreciate your review.

[Jack...]

Frieda is an amazing poet my friend and it was my good fortune to be able to write with her. Thank you so very much.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Now that is one hot number... I hope you didn't burn your fingers writing this.... some great metaphorical references.

[Frieda P]

We had ice water ready at all times ;-) Thanks Dale!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Yeah but that could ruin the keyboard.... welcome Moonbeam

[Frieda P]

T'wasn't for the keyboard fine sir. ;-)

[TL Boehm]

As skin serenades skin
And ariose shadows move in time upon the wall

Ok I just want you to know I hate this because it is warm and romantic and HOT and its just unfair that any two write this well together. So this is me sticking out my tongue and making puke faces in complete disgust. I'd saunter off right now - but my saunter is more like a shamble....or whatever those big ole walruses do on the beach.
Seriously. This was a rich, resonant poetic coupling. It was a dance of words - beautifully orchestrated. Bravo! Encore?
(Yall rocked it)

[Jack...]

Thanks Tammy...I think. :)

[Frieda P]

Haha, thanks for this TL, I needed a laugh today, and here's me sticking my tongue back out at you, those are Jack's lines, but I wholeheartedly agree, they're super! Thanks!

[TL Boehm]

The whole poem is a standout one, Freida Violins are such eloquent instruments and to capture that in a love poem - yup I was so impressed I had to resort to smartassery to cover my adoration. I'm so glad you two are back in full force here.

[Jack...]

Don't let her fool you, she sent those lines to me telepathically. I didn't have a clue.

[TL Boehm]

*Frieda - I slipped a cog and transposed my letters there.

[TL Boehm]

The cool thing Jack is that I don't think I could tell who wrote what line. Its like a "third voice"

[Frieda P]

That's okay T, for once I don't read 'fried'... ;-)

[Frieda P]

Haha love that you're the Featured Review!

[Barbara Walker]

Love this Frieda! Some amazing lines...you play me all night long like an orchestrated Maestro, I bend to your fingers with lusty allegro and as skin serenades skin are my favorites lines. Bravo!

[Frieda P]

The first line is mine, the skin to skin is Jacks, I think we worked well together in this collaboration, glad you enjoyed it Barbara.

[Friday]

It was the title of the piece that brought me here. An enchanting write with the music. Nice!

[Frieda P]

Thanks for your visit & review Friday, thrilled you enjoyed it.

[prachi prangya agasti]

nice really awesome... liked it a lot

[Frieda P]

Grazi mille prachi...

[Keith]

Now that is is really good! Top work guys.

[Frieda P]

Thanks Keith, it was a fun collaboration, jazzed you enjoyed!

[SteveB]

Just heard JAck read this on WPOM. Very well done. The interplay was seemless.

[Jack...]

Hey thanks so much Steve, I appreciate it, you sounded good yourself. I knew the answer, by the way. :)

[Frieda P]

Thanks Steve, didn't know that was you on the radio too, you both sounded great! Thanks so much.

[SteveB]

Thanks. Attention w***e that I am I am on every week.