Cinderfookingrella Senryu

Cinderfookingrella Senryu

A Poem by Frieda P


Pretty woman, HA!

Cinderfukingrella tale~

Don't fall for that jazz...







© 2013 Frieda P



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I see someone read my tutorial on how to auto-play a Youtube video, good thing I have my Firefox now set to disable all audio by default. Enabling for a moment. Listening. Hmm ... It could be softer music at that or let the reader click play if they are interested. :)

Pretty shoe tho.


Posted 11 Months Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

dw817

11 Months Ago

Have to agree with Mark. It was unexpected. Anyone who wants to know how to globally turn audio on/o.. read more
Frieda P

11 Months Ago

Stop raining on my parade. ;-P
dw817

11 Months Ago

"Into every life a little rain must fall." -- Ella Fitzgerald. :9


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Ok, I'm here not falling for it! Your friend in words, Pete

Posted 10 Months Ago


I've read this a few times, now. I can't help but laugh because it brings me back to the 90's!

Posted 11 Months Ago


Fairy tales are fodder for disaster. At least the original tales included more gruesome details. No one can rescue you, if only we could figure out how to rescue ourselves.

Posted 11 Months Ago


haha, nice ............................

Posted 11 Months Ago


HA! I know, right? Great s**t, as per usual xoxo

Posted 11 Months Ago


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Now this is a female poem. So by the first rule of womanhood if I come anywhere near to understanding it it will be changed immediately. So, can I say up front that not understanding does not mean that I don't appreciate it......please?

Posted 11 Months Ago


Loved the movie, love your poem, love the presentation....and still waiting to see if the fairytale does exist...:) Julie

Posted 11 Months Ago


Love it...very clever. I liked the movie, but for me, the best part was the black guy holding the sign that said something like "what's your dream". Unfortunately, that's exactly what this was...a Hollywood dream; things like this don't happen in real life. Sadly, all of us women watch these movies (or little girls watch prince charming save Cinderalla) and think that there is something like that out there for us, when in reality, true happiness comes from within. Anyway, I'm going too deep here...haha...witty, clever, entertaining, as always. Well done!

Posted 11 Months Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love is like a diamond. A diamond is forged by tremendous pressures and then it needs to be cleaned and polished and yes, even CUT - before it shines.
Theres no easy way to create a diamond.
Good senryu Frieda
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Posted 11 Months Ago


Mercy ! best line when dealing with a woman... Mercy !

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Months Ago

Ha, smart man!!
lee von cleef

11 Months Ago

Poem Frieda now open on my field.

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