~Butterfly in Heaven

~Butterfly in Heaven

A Poem by Frieda P
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A collaboration of music & poetry, piano composition by Jack, for which I will be eternally grateful. Thank you my dear friend with my whole entire heart. From me & Lee....♥♥

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I am but one lone butterfly
   set forth on the sea of my accord
took flight on a moonbeams prayer
    salt had stung my fragile wings
       
sunlight had parched my soul

I wander a'flutter stormy nights
   searching for the reasons       why
      in surrender's darkness there is light
      whilst angels whisper my name,
     all the while I'm still here & there












© 2013 Frieda P



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Frieda P

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Gorgeous description Frieda, the imagery is of a strong metaphor steeped in personal essence. This is a beautiful piano piece as well Jack, you are a man of many talents. I can see it being played at the beginning or end of a film, or sampled to create some more contemporary music styles. Well done the both of you.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

4 Years Ago

I agree, it should be a movie score, thanks so much for your lovely words Astro.
Astro

4 Years Ago

Thank you for yours.



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Powerful imagery -- I loved it

Posted 3 Years Ago


Presentation is outstanding, both poem and music work together in perfect harmony, an utterly lovely collaboration. You've both outdone yourselves here, adore the music Jack.

Posted 3 Years Ago


wow such a amazing write.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Believe It Or Not Believe It Or Not
This is my first attempt at slam poetry, and I'm excited to film a performance of this piece over the coming day.
This is a ballet of a wanderer....so beautiful and emotional! I can see you dancing through the,moments, hours, years, ....i've gone speechless( standing on the kitchen chair crying &clapping at the screen) It's more than exceptional! rating~pricless

Posted 4 Years Ago


This is so pretty and amazing. I love the imagery you create and the fantasy touch to the story. It's a beautiful thing, this is.

Posted 4 Years Ago


beautiful and you are a butterfly. I'm sorry that I havent been on here in a while.

Posted 4 Years Ago


"i'm still here and there" ... lol ... i like that part

Posted 4 Years Ago


I am awed by your craft. Such beautiful and intricate words are rarely seen. Your words left me entirely speechless for several moments. Thank you sincerely for posting.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

4 Years Ago

I'm enthralled by your kind words, thanks so much, hope you enjoyed the beautiful music too....
L.M.Warde

4 Years Ago

I did, very much!
What I understand is that, this poem is about the struggles you had in your life and how you saw the light at the end of the tunnel. Correct me if I am wrong Frieda :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

4 Years Ago

Partially right shiggy, it's about my sister who's a brilliant butterfly now...thanks for your inssi.. read more
the fragility of one butterfly and the power of a God, well done, good read.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

4 Years Ago

Grazie mille Thomas....

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Tags: butterfly, heaven, music, death, life, surrender, angels, soul

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Frieda P
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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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