~Tango'd Fantasy~

~Tango'd Fantasy~

A Poem by Frieda P

You breathe
delerium into me
knock me
 off balance
disordered 
maddened bliss
trip the musica
 of ardor'd fusion
intensity and verve,
 
dimensionality's
 tango
dance me to insanity
trip my light fandango
dip me to new heights
in your persuasive sensuality
   ~I'm swept away in your vital essence

© 2013 Frieda P


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Frieda, this is a sensory explosion....absolutely love it. Thank you for every nuance of this poem....from the architectual shape of the words in the poem to mimic a tango dancer, to the irresistible music of the tango dancing....it just all goes together to say "Wow!" Love it!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

9 Years Ago

Thanks so much, jazz'd you caught on to the shape also, still haven't found anyone who knows how to .. read more


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Frieda, this is a sensory explosion....absolutely love it. Thank you for every nuance of this poem....from the architectual shape of the words in the poem to mimic a tango dancer, to the irresistible music of the tango dancing....it just all goes together to say "Wow!" Love it!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

9 Years Ago

Thanks so much, jazz'd you caught on to the shape also, still haven't found anyone who knows how to .. read more
Woah
Boy have I missed your work!
This poem speaks of passion through dancing and I can feel it spilling through every word you write! And I love your crazy use of words! How ever do you come up with this stuff?

Posted 9 Years Ago


It would be interesting to read the masculine equivalent of this poem. "Dip me to new heights." Excellent.

Posted 10 Years Ago


What a beautiful poem and it is so nice to indulge in your beautiful poesies as always. I am much elated by your lovely talent.Darling ! Your simply awesome
With Much Love & Respect,
Sayed Mudasir

Posted 10 Years Ago


Great description of 'effect' and metaphor Frieda.

Posted 10 Years Ago


dip me to new heights. LOVE THAT.

Posted 10 Years Ago


How lively is the dance and the tone of your mind. This write is a read which never stops, in that I read it and then read it again to set the pace into my aging mind until I danced along with it. You are a gorgeous writer indeed and, on writing that, I shall go back and dance again to your words!

Posted 10 Years Ago


STOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOP!!!! This poem was the bomb bomb! Like seriously. Ohmygawd, I love the mixtures of dance and poems, it just makes me mellow in my seat and go oooooooooooo like cheerios. There was a lovely touch of passion keeping it classy and hot like the tango so I enjoyed so very much! AAAH! SOMEONE SWAY ME AROUND!!!!! I LOVE TANGO! Awesome job woot woot! :D

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jamie Cook

10 Years Ago

^-^ I just burped the ABC's that's how motivated I felt from that! Thanks Miss Frieda ^^ WOOT WOOT!!.. read more
Frieda P

10 Years Ago

HAHAHA now you just made me spit my coffee out, what a review! ;-)
Jamie Cook

10 Years Ago

Oops....eheheh (^^') Welcome Miss! :D
I sense a slight disconnection with reality, trusting someone else with our actions and watching them abuse the trust; hence the inhaling of delirium and dancing to insanity...

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

You mean you don't dance to insanity Tai?
It is said dancing is a vertical representation of a horizontal act and you have emphasized that with your sensual write. Such passion in every line and the Spanish music to accompany your words was a splendid choice. I enjoyed this. lydi**

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Yes I remember that line, wasn't in a movie, can't recall the name right now, thanks Lydie.

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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