~Gentle Quiver

~Gentle Quiver

A Poem by Frieda P
"

on my mind...

"

...and then I paused in the moment 
                          to devour the thought

 always a gentle quiver on my mind
like a good book, I never want it to end

   we closed our chapter with no song or rhyme
prologue memories were steamy and sultry
   moonlight smiles were tender rapture

introductions to dreamy blissful intensity
  intentions of our prelude to make it to the finale

as fairy tales go there was no happy ending
         our final chapter closed without a kiss

still, when I think of you in quiet moments
you are always a gentle quiver in my mind









© 2013 Frieda P



Author's Note

Frieda P
Poetry in Motion ~ Oil painting by Karen Tarlton


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I simply love how you do love, or at least love of before, in this case. Your words always have a certain silkiness to them, smoothly flowing across our eyes in alluring and sensuous stanzas. It is really hard for me to put my finger on the correct words to describe your style of writing except to say...this is definitely a Frieda. Amazing my friend.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

4 Years Ago

Awh Jack, you always give me a swelled head, I had to giggle at a Frieda, sounds like something you .. read more
Opeyemi Jide-Ojo

4 Years Ago

i agree with Jack; i can't exactly say how you write. i guess magical would suffice



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One word, stunning. Going into my favorites.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Wow, I'm confused in a good way. My heart has just been in a daze... :) Sweet and lovely! :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


It's very nice to have good remembrance of past loves. Can't really say that I'm in the same position, but it is definitely a beautiful thing. This was so well written, Frieda, your vocabulary and poetic skills are ones to be envied. :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


I guess I need to start getting to your work earlier love...47 reviews on 417 views doesn't leave me with a whole lot to say that hasn't already been said. Everyone knows how brilliant a writer you are, and there are only so many ways that it can be worded ;P I loved the title and how you utitlized it through the piece. And anything that equates a book with romance is bound to find its way to my heart. Beautiful work Mrs. R :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


This is one of my favorite Frieda fantasms...no doubt.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Magical! The words so smooth, I was reading it as if my heart was speaking it. Fantastic!

Posted 4 Years Ago


"moonlight smiles and I'm gentle rapture" I love this line

Posted 4 Years Ago


This poem really spoke to me. Your words were so vivid and left me feeling content. I love your style. Nice work

Posted 4 Years Ago


Dang Frieda, soft and sultry. Just when I think I can completely give up those little 'thought' moments I get on here and read something like this and my head goes... Hmmm, I think I'll delve into a little daydream for a moment. Thanks!
"we closed our chapter with no song or rhyme" - perfect line for an ending with no ending

Also, that last stanza is superb! Damn those quivers! Lol... Awesome poem, Frieda :)


Posted 4 Years Ago


What a lovely, plaintive poem. I really enjoyed reading it.

Posted 4 Years Ago



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Added on October 9, 2013
Last Updated on October 30, 2013
Tags: Quiver, thoughts, desire, devour, rhyme, memories, kiss, chapter, quiet moments

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Frieda P
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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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