`Poetic Dust

Sort of a Tanka just for fun...

New fangled sandwich

forget two slices of cheese,

not my cuppa tea

if i die before i wake...

make me poetic dust please

Reviews

[Robbie~xoxo~]

LOL I Love this!!.... Steve said it...this is "Priceless"! :D
Could we be more out there?.... I doubt it. ;P

I'm wondering like everyone else... "What are you smokin' today?"...(and can I have some?) :D

Keep it coming Friedalicious!...just not in my sandwich~xoxoxo~ :)

[Frieda P]

Hahaha Robbie, every once in a while you just have to let crazy rip........! LOL, thanks muchly, ha I think it's in your beloved potato chips girlfriend. ;-)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

No wonder I'm feeling crazy-hazy lately...It's because of you! lol ;P

[Great Aunt Astri]

OH this made me giggle! Very clever poem. Isn't death a horrible concept to contemplate. I wonder if we will still be conscious when we land on that slice of bread! It doesn't bear thinking about!

[Frieda P]

One never knows Aunt Astri, thanks! ;-)

[TL Boehm]

such an awesome write. (checks her cup for residue...perhaps Plath?) You're a peach

[Frieda P]

Oh Plath would be so nice, thanks Tam. :-)

[Tom C]

LOL that was so good until the food. LOL
Funny yet real.
Thank you

[Frieda P]

I think everyone will think twice before eating a sandwich from now on...ha, thanks Tom.

[costa siwale]

You're witty..great poem welldone

[Frieda P]

Thanks for your visit and review costa, much appreciated.

[Strider Marcus Jones]

Off the wall and off the scale. Inspiring imagery and lush phrasing. Excellent poem. 100/100

[Frieda P]

Gee thanks Strider, just having some fun, jazzed you enjoyed!

[ron]

OK, I was going to have a sandwich But now I'm not so sure...lol

[Frieda P]

Haha what's a little poet's dust...lol, thanks ron

[ron]

Well if it's poet dust made up of love and passion then I will take all that your willing to send my way :).

[Frieda P]

Pssh, what else from a poet?! ;-)

[ron]

Good point. Of course only a poet could do that ;-)

[Frieda P]

Exactly, I wonder what kind of dust the rest of the world has on their sandwiches, ha ;-)

[ron]

They don't have poet dust. So it can't be that good. Poet dust I would think is like Pixie Dust :)

[Frieda P]

Magical when mixed with dijon...haha ;-)

[ron]

Oh so you want a little spice in the mix.

[ron]

I am Wicca so Magic is near and dear to my heart.

[Tate Morgan]

Dont we all hope to be remembered as more than dust lol ?I for one don't like the thought of pushing up daisies. But the truth is we will lucky if we are remembered after our time.

[Frieda P]

Stop raining on my parade dear, is your middle name Killjoy? ha

[00000000000000000000000..]

This made my day my poetic friend I needed a good laugh but what time of year will this be held cause that matters too :)

[Frieda P]

Always happy to give you a good laff Jon. :-)

[0000000000000000000000000000]

Well its kinda rough here had a dear friend pass away,Shes was an awesome lady:) But I do ty for that:)

[DrD]

Yuk . . . reminds me of the family throwing a dead relative's ashes onto the sea when a strong wind came toward them. Oh well, that's another story. Another fun read and you do it so well my reviews get boring. Keep it up.

[Frieda P]

Now that's yuk, thanks Dave.

[Lydia Shutter]

Poetic dust....does that go better with mayo, ketchup, or grey poupon? Certainly unique....your imagination is a wonderful playground, my friend. Lydi**

[Frieda P]

Ha thanks Lydi, I think Grey Poupon, for me anyway... :-)