[Exposing] Love

[Exposing] Love

A Poem by Frieda P
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'translation in the code of love' ~A collaboration~ Jack & Frieda

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Moon glow confetti and tea leaf decisions

Skywriting written in ginger stardust
Creamsicle cosmos a' swirl of affection
Burnished songbirds sing in the key of destiny

   Low hanging fruit drips of endless day nectar

   Drizzling sweet messages of serendipity

   Drenching your lips, your taste effervescent    

   Lingering on a relish'd brink of aromatic happenstance

 

      Longing grips this heart in desired definitions

      Words defined in Braille still undecipherable

      Blinded by your essence, my fingers search the meaning 

      Kismet speaks the language of secrets little known or (unexposed)

 

      In a whispered voice that only love could translate











© 2013 Frieda P



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The language of love is both beautiful and powerful. You two have interwoven your voices in perfect harmony in this piece and your imagery is sumptuous:

Moon glow confetti and tea leaf decisions
Skywriting written in ginger stardust
Creamsicle cosmos a' swirl of affection
Burnished songbirds sing in the key of destiny

Low hanging fruit drips of endless day nectar
Drizzling sweet messages of serendipity
Drenching your lips, your taste effervescent
Lingering on a relish'd brink of aromatic happenstance

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

4 Years Ago

Thanks Anne, Jack started it and told me to run with it, we had fun doing this one, jazzed you enjoy.. read more
Jack...

4 Years Ago

Thank you so very much Anne. Frieda is a dream to work with.



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ginger stardust. OK. wish I'd written that little phrase.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Charming collaboration you two, you definitely work well together.

Posted 4 Years Ago


You two, Jack and Frieda..you always bring out the best in each other....this is such a lovely write.

Posted 4 Years Ago


A beautiful collaboration by two amazing poets. Your words blend together seamlessly.

:) Julie

Posted 4 Years Ago


This is awesome what a great union of creative talent. I could feel the passion in every word.

Posted 4 Years Ago


" In a whispered voice that only love could translate" Amazing collab. Wonderful job, both of you.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Moon glow confetti and tea leaf decisions
Skywriting written in ginger stardust
Creamsicle cosmos a' swirl of affection
Burnished songbirds sing in the key of destiny

I have to say this is sublime... excellent poem :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


What a beautiful collaboration, of you two... sigh, it made me feel warm.
The connection I felt, you two are both artists in high form!

So enjoyed every single word of it.
That last line, is so true...

Beautifully done both!

- Elisa

Posted 4 Years Ago


Interesting piece as a collaboration. Strong and filled with brittle metaphors. Second line of the first stanza might be strengthened by removing the word written as skywriting is written! Or by using 'sky script written'?

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Your volume of define love speaks where gravity sets in the wind finding balance in amaze:) Awesome write indeed:)

Posted 4 Years Ago



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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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