[Exposing] Love

'translation in the code of love' ~A collaboration~ Jack & Frieda

Moon glow confetti and tea leaf decisions

Skywriting written in ginger stardust

Creamsicle cosmos a' swirl of affection

Burnished songbirds sing in the key of destiny

   Low hanging fruit drips of endless day nectar

   Drizzling sweet messages of serendipity

   Drenching your lips, your taste effervescent    

   Lingering on a relish'd brink of aromatic happenstance

 

      Longing grips this heart in desired definitions

      Words defined in Braille still undecipherable

      Blinded by your essence, my fingers search the meaning 

      Kismet speaks the language of secrets little known or (unexposed)

 

      In a whispered voice that only love could translate

Reviews

[icelandicblue]

The language of love is both beautiful and powerful. You two have interwoven your voices in perfect harmony in this piece and your imagery is sumptuous:

Moon glow confetti and tea leaf decisions
Skywriting written in ginger stardust
Creamsicle cosmos a' swirl of affection
Burnished songbirds sing in the key of destiny

Low hanging fruit drips of endless day nectar
Drizzling sweet messages of serendipity
Drenching your lips, your taste effervescent
Lingering on a relish'd brink of aromatic happenstance

[Frieda P]

Thanks Anne, Jack started it and told me to run with it, we had fun doing this one, jazzed you enjoyed.

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much Anne. Frieda is a dream to work with.

[emmajoy]

There's something about a collaboration that stretches the people involved. They display plumage.. ruffle their imagination and come up with the most delightful and colourful poems. Like yours - tho there's little to touch this right now. As to selecting special lines, no way.. no favouritism by me! You work together like sugar and spice, honey on fresh.made bread, or, a sultry song accompanied by a singer with a soul.. and all that jazz! Bravo, my darlings!

[Frieda P]

Oooh, I like that Petulia 'display plumage', you've such a way with words my friend, jazzed you enjoyed! x

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much Garden Girl. This was a fun piece to write and a thrill to work with Frieda again. I appreciate you bringing wonderful blooms to our world.

[Baby Ricochet]

Cute. I'd have called it low hanging love or expose yourself for love, now those are some catchy titles

[Frieda P]

Ha, remind me to call you next time Mark.

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

NICE WORK~TOGETHER! WONDERFUL WORDS COMPOSED AS A PAIR.

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much for your visit and review Josie, much appreciated.

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

YOU AR WELCOME! :)

[Diana]

A wonderful collaborative exposition of the "unexposed."

[Frieda P]

Grazie mille Diana....

[Jack...]

Diana, I am so happy you enjoyed this. It was my pleasure to write with such a wonderful poet.

[Angel]

You two dance so beautifully together...you take my breath away.
This is lovely...
Makes me feel young and in love again...

[Frieda P]

Thanks for your sweet review Angel, muchly appreciated...

[Jack...]

Thank you so much sweet Angel. I appreciate your kind words for our poem.

[Mark]

ya puts down your money and ya takes your chances. Nice work you two :)

[Frieda P]

Ha, you would say that Mark........thanks :-)

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Mark.

[Rita L. Sev]

Skywriting written in ginger stardust
Creamsicle cosmos a' swirl of affection

Each of you adds your own ingredients, and sweetness is born.

Love is figuring out another person, who is till trying to figure their own self out... Great collaboration, Frieda and Jack!

(pardon my terrible grammar)

[Frieda P]

Thanks Rita, jazzed you enjoyed our musings!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Love is many things... mostly it is a miracle but it is also an endless mystery no one will ever figure out.

Endless great lines but these are my favorite

Low hanging fruit drips of endless day nectar
Drizzling sweet messages of serendipity
Drenching your lips, your taste effervescent

[Frieda P]

Thanks Dale, jazzed you enjoyed.

[Sami Khalil]

" Longing grips this heart in desired definitions

Words defined in Braille still undecipherable

Blinded by your essence, my fingers search the meaning
Kismet speaks the language of secrets little known or (unexposed)



In a whispered voice that only love could translate"

You have exposed love and translated it in the most beautiful way within the unknown of things. So many people are touched deeply by your writes and that is for a reason that you speak the universal language...:)

[Frieda P]

Twas Jack's idea, I just followed his lead, grazie mille Sami. :-)

[Sami Khalil]

You are both welcome muchly...:)...........

[Jack...]

Thanks so much my friend.

[Sami Khalil]

MY pleasure...Any time...:)......................

[Deuces]

What a fiery combination. It's definitely beautiful. It's as if one whispers to the other and is waiting in anticipation to reply and profess and even more powerful love.

And yes, it takes love to translate the unknown many times.
Loved this. Nice work.

[Frieda P]

Grazie mille Cyn, glad you enjoyed our collaboration.

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much.