Flutter'd Dash

Breath that feels as shards of glass,

kneeling in the dust of vapored stars

fragmented pieces of a forlorn past

abandoned and bereft tracks of soul

haunted in the fear of the night

allusions of a faceless faltered grace

day breaks and tears still tremble

left in the quake of a flutter'd dash 

Author's Note

Reviews

[Mark]

I just wanna give you a big bear hug and tell you everything is going to be okay.

[Tom]

Delightfully artistic both visually and literally !

[Justsimplyjulia]

beautiful imagery. Took me to a beautiful world.... lovely word choice.
-Dragon

[emmajoy]

Words escaping, weeping your hurt. Dear you.
'Breath that feels as shards of glass, ~ kneeling in the dust of vapored stars..'
How can words so painful read so beautiful?

[Pryde Foltz]

You bring such beauty to deep sadness. A great piece, Frieda.

[Cassie]

This is quite sad Frieda, joy will come and you write to us about joy too.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this is a winding road of sadness...so expressive...you always touch our hearts deeply with your words.

jacob

[Dr. Wood ?]

beautifully sad Frieda....

[Ken Simm.]

Light, in one way, footsteps through a troubled soul. Lines in another way full of lambent meaning. You really know how to so this my friend.

[writing mojo]

shattered more than dreams with this piece, more like atmospheric pressure withering in being to close in a mountainous release of such breath taking poetry..great piece