Poppy Love

You know where I live and breathe,

enchantment in your eyes led us amid a field of poppies,

etching my skin with wildflowers I flourish'd

we languished amongst meadow's feathery pillows

moon shone upon our charm'd sensual dalliance

skies of apricot nectar loom'd brilliant as we merged,

as ethereal stars connected of our primal yearnings,

breathless, we paused in desire's transcendent

 afterglow

Reviews

[Foxemerald]

In your typical vein, a burst of fiery flame brings a world of color, and light, in just a few lines. There is a thundering quality within this poem that takes us into the moment. The entrance of the natural images is mesmerizing, and deeply enhance a message that you cannot miss.

[Frieda P]

Thanks for your lovely review Foxemerald, always love hearing from you.

[R. L. Hill]

Ugh. This is ethereal and lovely. They are making love in a field and I love that image!

[Frieda P]

*Smiling* @ you....thanks a bunch Quirklet!

[Scott Metro]

You are a beautiful soul...this is so tender and loving.
Miss Frieda I always enjoy your romantic writes....soothing and delightful.

My admiration sweet one.
Scott

[Frieda P]

I always love your visits Scott, you make my heart sing, unless you're sending me cheeky monkeys haha, thanks!

[Scott Metro]

Kiss.
Scott

[Frieda P]

Awh thanks, sending you a squishy hug x

[Scott Metro]

Accepted with an open heart....
:) :) :)
S.

[:o]

Beautiful words embroidered by an excellent poet. You're the best Frieda. Good luck with all your words.

[Frieda P]

You're too kind Lacey, thanks for your sweet words.

[Justine]

I love Poppies and you have used their beauty brilliantly here. Your opening line is dramatic and powerful. "Skies of apricot" had me sighing at the way the scene is described. It's sexy, sensual and tastefully done. Loved it. Justine :)

[Frieda P]

Me too, poppies have to be my favorite wildflower, so thrilled you enjoyed this one Justine, thanks muchly. :-)

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

That final line makes you stand still! Lovely piece.

[Frieda P]

Always good to stop you dead in your tracks Travis, ha...thanks. ;-)

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

With that smile out in front, I can't complain. ;)

[Frieda P]

Now you have me giggling like a school girl. ;-)

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

That's even better than a smile. ;)

[Frieda P]

Not when you're way past school girl age hahaha ;-P

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

Lol silly, that's when it's most special.

[Frieda P]

Silly I do best. haha ;-)

[David Scott]

At first I thought you might be giving one of our popular poets a shout out... ;)
Ah, then I inhaled the lines and they melted into my subconscious impatience and I saw the intoxication of lovers. Addicted to the rise and fall of their passion...
What a sweet start to the day!

[Frieda P]

Well I love her too Scott, but she wasn't there on this day. ;-) Thanks, jazz'd it brightened the start of your day.

[David Scott]

Jazz'd you are jazz'd... ;) Be carful not to misspell this word eh. *naughty laugh*

[Frieda P]

Ha you're bad, too early in morning hon. ;-P

[David Scott]

Ya know, "That's what she said."
I like the mornings... the afternoons and the evenings and the middle of the night at 3:00 AM. ha.
Why limit your happiness to a time of day? Finish your coffee then. ;P back at ya.

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful artwork and description. Would be nice to be embraced with poppies and love near. Nice thoughts and visions create by the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Frieda P]

So jazz'd you enjoyed Coyote, thank you.

[Jack...]

It may be cold outside here this morning but this beautiful poem warmed me right up.

"etching my skin with wildflowers I flourish'd" This line is only one of the many in this piece that tocuhed me and opened my eyes. Oh how I wish I had written this.

You take beautiful to an entirely new level, you paint before our eyes wonderful visions of the heart. This my sweet friend, and I know I have said this before many times, is one of your best. This one I will keep close for many more cold days still lie ahead. Amazing Frieda.

[Frieda P]

As you have warmed my heart with your glowing words my dear friend, I can't thank you enough.