~if

~if

A Poem by Frieda P


If i trace'd upon your heartstrings, 
scripted sweet words in your name
captured moonbeams & butterflies spirit, 

if a poet's soul could ignite your essence
light the milky-way and make eyes glisten
would you be stargazing upon my face

if zest of living's experiences be captured in a word,
unfurling the mysteries of fantasies ginger
promising you eternity's sublime surrender

Would you stay to dance with me, just one more day....


© 2014 Frieda P



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if a poet's soul could ignite your essence
light the milky-way and make eyes glisten

Only if ...


loved the write !
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Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Thanks so much Anand !



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If I asked you to stay forever would you...? A life full of ifs never to be sidelined even when you finally meet who you can call a soulmate.. The ifs are still there. Nice one your poems r a learning journey for me. Continue inspiring!

Posted 3 Years Ago


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Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Thanks so much luviva!
sooo romantic.
loved it!
-Dragon

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Thanks so much Dragonheart!
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Bri
I love how romantic and deep this is. it's beautiful.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Thanks Bri.
if a poet's soul could ignite your essence
light the milky-way and make eyes glisten

Only if ...


loved the write !
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Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Thanks so much Anand !
Words from the heart, soft and tender
I do like...very much

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Thanks muchly Rock.
If. So many things spring forward from that one word. An insightful write.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

3 Years Ago

So true Diana, thanks for pausing.
....so lovingly worded.....

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Thanks for reading this one sweetbind.
This is just so beautiful and emotive, Frieda. I am in a melancholy mood tonight, and this has really gripped my heart...

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Thanks so much Rita.
Dear Frieda,

You are a glacier of words and imaginations.

A one wind that charms each face and makes them smile finally towards the ending words.

Perhaps, I am totally mesmerized with the poetry.

Thanks for sharing
Stay blessed
Prodical

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

3 Years Ago

I'm mesmerized by our review, thanks for pausing, and the glowing review Prodical.
prodicallife

3 Years Ago

You are always welcome dear Frieda.

Stay blessed
Prodical
This is so soft and romantic Frieda...truly a beautiful poem. You do hold a golden pen my friend.

:) Julie

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Thanks Julie, coming from the jewel of the pen, means a lot my friend. :-)

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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