`perhaps~

...perhaps, it was a pause

     yet, it felt as though an eternity

   an explosive quiver in the moment

       sending shivers up my spine

 the intensity of our

   moonlit raptur'd intentions

 quiet sentiments

         adorning me in silken scarves 

 we danc'd upon each other's soul

   a slow and steady waltzing of the heart

 our spaces filled

       of sparkling champagne kisses

            & burgundy night's ardor'd desires

 impulses of two connected 

      whimsy'd forbidden forces

  spirited play of lovers vaulted us

            to another essence of time

 those were the days of seductive

               surrender'd secret interludes

   mirror'd in unearthing of abandon'd 

                      affection's sentiments

  we breathe in our darkly promis'd persuasion 

                     til the judgement day call'd

Author's Note

Reviews

[lee von cleef]

Judgement the taste of dirt sweet soil old vine right between maidens toes white oak cask char only showing on the inside tannins makin her breath heavy, her voice rolling with the ocean of promiscuity promises pierce her tongue. Perhaps.......

[Frieda P]

Perhaps she calls it something other....

[Cryingkate]

Holy Sack Cloth !
She's bringing down Jerusalem !
Nice and slow she waltz's round 7 times
in her silk scarves and then
shouts of Victory as she blows the Horn
Then they all come a tumbling down.

[Frieda P]

Ha that put a huge smile on my face, see Connie, I don't always write with dark crayons ;-)

[Cryingkate]

You put a bigger smile on my face.. Awesome ! This was sexy for both sexes.
You must have a Special crayon Box unlike no other :-)

[Frieda P]

Ha you're sweet, I wrote a fluffy one since you called me out on all my dark ones lately ;-P

[Cryingkate]

Awe! I was just checking to make sure you weren't living it :-)
We have to watch out for each other keeping that silver cord connected for each other.
Taking these ethereal Journeys onto dark paths can sometimes disconnect us to the source of Love/Light. Without each other we can get lost out there... :-)

[Frieda P]

Not living it in the moment, more like past stuff that won't stay out of my dang head! I thank you for your compassion and kindness Connie....you're aces. ;-)

[oscardelamarca]

wow!! awesome friend... awesome, I congratulate you, you know how I lead the reader to your lyrics

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much oscar, glad you enjoyed.

[luviva]

judgement day???
so what was your verdict my lady?
them last three lines struck a nerve.
great piece

[Frieda P]

Oh you know, you cheat, you usually end up paying the piper, or the lawyer hahah ;-)

[kublakhan27]

I'm gradually making my way through the list Mrs.R, and I could not hold off on this one any longer. A delightful little journey through a moment of passionate ecstasy. I think this one works on any number of levels...passionate, sexy, loving, and yes, mischievous, or should I just say bad? ;) Thank you for the lascivious visions as always love :) xo

[Frieda P]

Ahhh 'lascivious visions', now there's a mouthful..ha, bad, like good right Benji? Thanks luv, jazz'd you enjoy'd.....xo

[kublakhan27]

Haha bad is the new good...maybe ;P xo

[NeiL ArandA]

HAHAHA we do have some funny and hilarious reviews here .... imaginations go wild with your piece.

[Frieda P]

Ha, I enjoy'd the reviews too...some pretty funny stuff you're right, thanks Neil.

[MsJewel]

Wow! You have outdone yourself with this sensual little gem Frieda... This is smokin hot girlfriend!

:) Julie

[Frieda P]

Woo, smokin', thanks so much Julie, jazz'd you enjoyed :-)

[s y e]

OMG! Where did the not-so-innocent-but innocent you go? Well you're never innocent but ya know what i mean... jelly bean ;-P This was... something else... Gawd woman! Wow.

Like....



WOW!

[Frieda P]

Haha whatchu tawkin bout Willis? ;-)

[s y e]

Is that a rhetorical question, 'cause I don't know the answer..... Lol.

[roarke]

Never seen 'd's done so well. This is smooth, linear yet etheric. I think 'perhaps' is a perfect title to this piece.
"adorning me in silken scarves
we danc'd upon each other's soul
a slow and steady waltzing of the heart"

very nice.

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much roarke, gad you enjoy'd my waltz..........

[KeeD]

I'm sorry people on WC and everyone else who reads this, but this poem just makes me want to have sex with Frieda (haha, the nerve on me, luckily you can't slap me over the internet, sucks to be you :P) . Gosh Damn, when someone writes so sexy, what's a man suppose to do.. You literally drain the ink out of me hahah.. I honestly could really have a wife by now if I wrote the way you did :D. Teach me your ways senpai, I wanna write all night.. make the read oh so right.
P.S. You wrote this about me didn't you? :P

[Frieda P]

OMG Kee, you made me spit my coffee all over my computer screen! Ha, just call me Mrs Robinson grasshopper. ;-)

[KeeD]

Lol so you spit.. "takes notes down for future reference. Lol that was pretty bold of me to jump all over ya like that but hey your poem got the freak outta me haha.

[Frieda P]

Ha ha No, not usually, only when a hot young guy makes those kind of comments on my poetry! ;-)