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~~Fluttery Felicitous Bliss

~~Fluttery Felicitous Bliss

A Poem by Frieda P
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Collaborative butterfly musings ~ Jack & Frieda

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Dreamy rush of butterflies surrender my lucidity
a'stray in the essence of fluttering felicitous bliss
my spirit soars to apperception's heights
envelop'd in a surreal fantasia of flight
 
Rainbow whisperings illumine my emotions
feathering the edges of flesh-tone fingers
slowly upon tingl’d thighs in shadowed sighs
emblazon into a firework’s frenzy
 
Apricot dew and flowery sun-kissed etchings
I languish in the floating billow of clouds
wishes come true in the moment of release
blushing my cheeks and tempting my spirit
 
Lilacs form on halluncine’d reflections
prismatic streams a’wash upon painted pastel eyelids
quivering breathless within heart spiraled desires
 singing melodically the sparkl’d radiance of your song
 




















© 2014 Frieda P



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It's surreal. the use of color and the flicker of movement with the hands, the shivering, the thighs, and moreover reality paint a picture of coming between two worlds. one painted brightly in colors, and butterfly movement, and another in the present. It sort of brings to mind moments that we experience now and can't believe. It makes me feel, like I walked into one of those abstract paintings, where you have a distinct figure dressed decadently in pastel and metallic gems. it really does have a nostalgic feel.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

3 Years Ago

What a stunning review songstress, I love where this took you, I'm looking at our collaboration in a.. read more
Jack...

3 Years Ago

Thank you so very much Songstress. But the true beauty of this piece is the poet who's page it is fe.. read more



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Hmm this is a beautiful. Writ. Thank you for pending I enjoyed. This read

Posted 2 Years Ago


aah this is sooo beautiful I love it

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Thanks Latifa, glad you enjoyed our collaboration.
Lovely images and feelings here Frieda. Enjoyed it very much, congrats to both of you!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Jack...

3 Years Ago

Thank you so very much my friend.
Giggling Star

3 Years Ago

:) .......... Star
Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Grazie mille stargazer
I can definitely hear your voice and Jack's voice in this piece.
Anything you write in collaboration is seemingly done with ease.

(I didn't mean to rhyme. Haha.)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Ha that's about the only time I rhyme, when it comes out purely by accident, thanks Arzel, glad you .. read more
Jack...

3 Years Ago

Thanks so much my friend. Happy you enjoyed our poetic project.
When I read a collaboration by Frieda and Jack, I am reminded of artist's brushstrokes, each line supporting a masterpiece. Bliss... is a good word for this poem.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

3 Years Ago

You're too kind Rita, thanks so much.
Jack...

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much Rita. Frieda wields the brush...I just run out for sandwiches
Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Don't listen to a word he says Rita!
Pretty, floral essence painting a lovely garden of words.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Thanks Sue, glad you enjoyed.
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Hi, I'll start by saying the font and image is really beautiful accompanied by such a sweet innocent sound.
So pure and touching are the words, they embrace the reader like some wind kisses on cheeks, I could feel the love and heart in each line. Some people make lust and passion seem so cheap and degrading.. This is the complete opposite, you make it feel like heaven. I could soar in cloud filled skies, dreaming away night after night to such touching poetry. Great collaboration

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

3 Years Ago

'embrace the reader like some wind kisses on the cheeks'...that's poetry right there, thanks so much.. read more
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3 Years Ago

Enjoyed and inspired, I rarely write about love and happiness for I fall short of such brilliance as.. read more
Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Believe me I'm not always feeling so fluttery myself, thanks again my friend, so kind of you to say.
Oh my goodness. I felt like I was in a completely different place when I read this...Wow. This was so good. And music in the background, that's so neat. Is that you singing? That is so pretty. Great job with this :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

3 Years Ago

I dance like a maniac, but you wouldn't want to see that either ;-)
❤ Maggie ❤

3 Years Ago

Hahaha I LOVE dancing!!! But yes, I don't dance in front of ANYONE!!XD
❤ Maggie ❤

3 Years Ago

Hahah!! I love dancing, but I'm afraid I'm awful at it! I don't dance in front of anyone!
Love it, Frieda! It has this surreal-ness to it that just draws one in and refuse to let them leave. Excellent work!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Indeed he does, thanks again!
Jack...

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much Katherine, but the talented one here is Frieda. I have learned so much from her.
Katherine R.

3 Years Ago

D: So who do I give credit too? You both say the same!

Well....ah! Excellent job, both .. read more
It's surreal. the use of color and the flicker of movement with the hands, the shivering, the thighs, and moreover reality paint a picture of coming between two worlds. one painted brightly in colors, and butterfly movement, and another in the present. It sort of brings to mind moments that we experience now and can't believe. It makes me feel, like I walked into one of those abstract paintings, where you have a distinct figure dressed decadently in pastel and metallic gems. it really does have a nostalgic feel.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

3 Years Ago

What a stunning review songstress, I love where this took you, I'm looking at our collaboration in a.. read more
Jack...

3 Years Ago

Thank you so very much Songstress. But the true beauty of this piece is the poet who's page it is fe.. read more

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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