~Translucent Renditions

Mesmerized by your emblazoned words, 

   enchanted within your eye's opalesce glints

  your alluring demeanor entices my aching heart

you are the lavender skies pierce'd with apricot diamonds,

  impetus 

zephyrs that transcend me to scintillating destinations

   riveted in your every echo'd illuminating flicker

the intensity in your raging winds never ceases

  enthralled in your fervent thunder intensifying ocean depths

 my spirit is elevated to new heights in flight'd chimera

carried away in rendition's cast vapors your dimensions provoke,

  translucent peaceful renderings within stellar light's tranquility 

forever surrendering in the intense flames that dance unto my soul

Author's Note

Reviews

[Jack...]

As if standing in the garden waiting for that perfect rose to bloom and before my eyes it appears and it is so much more beautiful than I could have ever imagined. The bouquet of your words my sweet friend is more fragrant, melodically tinted and filled with all of the magic of nature dreams. When you conceive an idea, it forms inside of you, it grows and them it blooms. Soft petals wrap around this dancing poetic score. Lighter than air, as rose petals on a whispering breeze, fliting about like happy butterflies, your poerty is this.

Beautiful frieda...simply beautiful

[Frieda P]

Sigh Jack, there's poetry in your words always, I think you should pen this review. Thanks for the song suggestion, it really suits this one perfectly. Your words kiss my heart in a huge smile my sweet friend. x

[R. L. Hill]

I don't typically comment in others' reviews, but dang, Jack. Love it ^^ lol

[Katherine R.]

I love this, Frieda! Whenever you write surreal stuff, you always hit the prefect mark! Keep up the great work!

[Frieda P]

Ha I dwell in surreal Katherine, thanks muchly my friend! ;-)

[Katherine R.]

I should visit your domain sometime, to see if I'm any good at it. :D

[Frieda P]

Sure, open invite, we serve vino too. ;-D

[Katherine R.]

XD I'll be sure to visit sometime!

[Frieda P]

We're here 24/7, sounds like a plan ;-)

[Katherine R.]

Okay! See you there soon!

[redflutterby]

Like a warm tropical breeze this carreses the mind and body. So tender and dreamy...sigh... just rocks you in its intoxicating arms. Swooning here with stars in my eyes... xo

[redflutterby]

We both seem to have that render word on our minds... lol!!

[Frieda P]

Ahh now you put stars in my eyes, dreaming of Belize's intoxication, thanks Red, I just love when you swoon. ;-) xo

[redflutterby]

Lol...I don't swoon often...when I do its because of something special! Sigh... belize.. x

[ron]

WOW...Breathing hard with beating heart that can't stop. I melted a thousand times Frieda. This is beyond words for me. I love, love, love this one.

[Frieda P]

Wow back at you ron, I just literally jump'd up and did the happy dance! Thanks so so much my friend....

[ron]

Oh my...I wish I could have seen that. You are most welcome.

[s y e]

// ou are the lavender skies pierce'd with apricot diamonds,
impetus zephyrs that transcend me to scintillating destinations
riveted in your every echo'd illuminating flicker //

This is so beautiful, Frieda! You words just pull the reader into the little story you have just created, this is such a passionate write with the beautiful imagery and wording.... how much more amazing can you get? You're blowing me to NJ each time! This is costing me you know, ha!

I love it, so worth the money, too! ;-))

RED HOT flip flops & all that jazz! x

[Frieda P]

Ahh sweetie you just made my heart skip a beat with this fantabulous review, glad you were able to fly away with me...I'm still waiting for you to show your luverly face, what's taking you so long? ;-)

[s y e]

The weather.... blame the weather. ;-))

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Oh my....(sigh)

I sooooo feel this, Friedalious!

Your words entice, and pull me into this lovely passionate storm... it's maddening!!
I love it!!

A provocative write, indeed!~xoxo~:)

[Frieda P]

Oh woo, a sigh....so jazz'd you took this flight with me dear friend, thanks so much Robbie, your reviews always add a sweet light to my day. :-) xoxo

[Robbie~xoxo~]

and your poetry brightens mine! ~xoxo~:)

[Sami Khalil]

The flames of passion live within your soul illuminating the flickers of the imagination whereas the raging winds outside is knocking at your door to take your elevated spirit away to scintillating destinations. A wonderful write...:)............

[Frieda P]

You twist my words to tickle my fancy dear Sami, thanks muchly my friend. Another pic, you're making me dizzy hon. ;-)

[Sami Khalil]

Hahaha. On purpose...lol
You are welcome...:)...................

[Frieda P]

Hahaha I'm dizzy already my friend. ;-)

[Sami Khalil]

:).......................

[Frieda P]

:-P

[Sami Khalil]

^^~^^ :>)..................