~Mystical Yearnings

I loved you 'fore the beginning of time

mystical yearnings captivated my soul

endless longing of passion and tenderness's absolute rapture,

intoxicated in love's sweet cherry wine  

senseless I dance in  whirling euphoria

my existence lies in the spirit of heart

let me be your moonlight eager to glimmer

the flower garden of thorn-less rose's bliss

power of wildflowers surrender to the sun,

beyond the starry night, void of space

transcending all earthly joys

an aura of splendiferous grace & adoration

fiery sacred honorings tormenting skies

hungering for your taste of passion

drunk in the inhalations of your ecstasy

Author's Note

Reviews

[redzone]

Splendiferous, now there is an adjective... and it describes perfectly the mythical, magical, wildflower surrender of this poem.. and you "had me at, "I loved you 'fore the beginning of time", Frieda... and then you went on to moonbeams and thorneless roses and .. and... well, HELP Frieda cause I am lost in your "ecstasy"... mind if I stay here awhile?? don't think I want to be found... have I mention'd how much I am enjoying your poem Frieda... just in case you haven't noticed, I AM!!! ;o) oh my.. "splendiferous!!!"

[Frieda P]

Gawd you should see the huge smile on my face curt, stay as long as you wish....we're serving vino in a bit...cheers love ;-)

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

ALMOST LIKE A GREETING FOR A SPECIAL SOMEONE, BUT MUCH MORE REPRESENTED HERE~

[Frieda P]

Thanks Josie, glad you enjoyed.

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

U R WELCOME! :)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Ohhhh la la!!

Is it too early to drink wine??...I believe I am intoxicated this morning! (he he)

What a build of euphoria.... Damn, Friedalicious! I haven't had breakfast yet.. ;)
You are a luscious writer, indeed!

Love this!~xoxoxo~ :)

[Frieda P]

Never, you can drink vino for breakfast! Thanks, jazz'd you enjoy'd this one, I wish I knew what the heck she was singing.....thanks so much Robbie!.........xoxo

[R. L. Hill]

Ugh. How do you do this??? Seriously, the words just flowed so effortlessly. This poem is addicting in the best sense because the love portrayed feels real and that sense of heady emotion is intoxicating. This is just so beautiful. "I loved you 'fore the beginning of time/mystical yearnings captivated my soul" This first line seals my fate for adoration of this poem. It relays a moment of destiny where you know that your soul is meant to dance with his. It was laid out for you both in the stars before time. Favorite of yours thus far.

[Frieda P]

Hahaha I think this is the first time I got a review that started off with Ugh! Thanks Quirklet, only you...muchly appreciated, I'll be by for some more of your quirky reads soon....

[R. L. Hill]

YAY! Glad I made ya smile with my review ^_^

[Frieda P]

Indeed you did, actually giggled a bit too ;-)

[R. L. Hill]

:O I feel honored, oh giggly one

[Frieda P]

;-D

[Lyn Anderson]

Englishly speaking, bravo. As for the subject matter, well, it is so lovely for someone to be able to feel that way.

[Frieda P]

I only write them KL, doesn't mean I know ftw I'm talking about ;-)

[>.]

If a lady yearned for me in a way your poem describes, I think that's when i'd know what true love feels like. You make the idea of love seem so beautiful, even more than it is. If I want to learn how to re-feel anything again I just need to come to your poetry, it sets the essence of everything a man needs to know about loving a woman. Amazing write

[Frieda P]

What an utterly sweet sentiment BCE, thanks muchly, you made my day.

[Sami Khalil]

I have felt the Sufi mystic charm in your lovely and romantic write. Excellent whirling of emotions...The dance of ecstacy in a wonderful poetic form...:)....................

[Frieda P]

Ahh sweet review Sami, I have no clue what she's singing about but I hope it's wicked. ;-) Grazie mille.........

[Sami Khalil]

Hahaha...You are welcome...:).................

[Frieda P]

;-)

[Sami Khalil]

^^~^^ :>)...........................

[BlackRose]

Every man's dream waiting anxiuosly to come true. The thoughts they would tell let alone ignited into realism. Filled with such beauty and grace and fermented on every man's mind, haha. ;o)

[Frieda P]

Thanks BlackRose, 'fermented' now there's a word. ;-)

[Scott Metro]

A splendid surrender...
Lovely choice of delicate and tender words to impart your desire.
Very pretty.

Admiration.
Scott

[Frieda P]

Thanks muchly Scott, jazz'd you enjoyed.

[Scott Metro]

:)
Scotty..

[Jack...]

Well, what can I say...there are 1000's of men out there, myself included that would give anything to have a beautiful woman like you say these words to them. Frieda, when you write about love, it is truly love. Pure, sweet, fragrant love. SIGH....there, I sighed and I'm still sighing.

Extremely beautiful and emotional. Amazed I sit, daydreaming within your words.

[Frieda P]

Wish you could see the huge smile you brought to my face Jack....your responses always touch me, an otherworldly review, that's for sure....thank you so much my sweet friend!