Dark Angel

Let me be your dark angel

monopolizing 

your fantasies

romping upon your fiery bare'd skin

whispering through the echoes of your mind

I'll possess your soul, be your every desire

small price to pay for that winding path to hell

Author's Note

~Fantasy graphic by Karol Bak

Reviews

[Jennie Baron]

Love the eroticism...it's difficult to express eroticism in writing without being pornographic. I struggle with that all the time but you've done it here. It expresses the overpowering nature of desire and how it can make us follow dark paths. I am a prose writer but this poetry captured me, and the graphics are amazing.

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much for this amazing review Jennie, nice to meet you. I agree, sometimes my eroticism goes over the top, glad you enjoy'd this one.

[Mark]

In retrospect , I'm not sure what I find more tempting, the Darkness, or the Erotica....So what does that say about me? Ahhh... And so begins the journey within....

[Mark]

Mmmmm.... Deliciously erotic and dark at the same time. Tempting.

[kublakhan27]

I relate to this in a way you'd never think of...and it has nothing to do with the eroticism ;P But you know I love that no matter what, and the photo as well...this is definitely one for Mrs.R's soundtrack ;) xo

[Vidya Bacchus]

A little bit sexy and dark at the same time.I really like this one :)

[Tai Ryens]

This reminded me of the tale of angels and the fall from heaven mentioned in the Christian Bible, being that they inhabit the nethers with their leader . . . Well done, I like how deceptive and seductive you've made them sound.

[Frieda P]

Thanks Tai, inside every devil once live'd an angel of sorts...glad you enjoyed.

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Love the poem, especially how it goes into depth of the dark side. Great write.

Kaze~

[Frieda P]

Thanks, jazz'd you liked the dark side as well.

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Your very welcome. :-D

[Frieda P]

Oh a dark avatar, you've changed haha ;-)

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Yep, hahahahahaha! ;-)

[kurrupted]

Frighteningly dark yet awesomely sexy... from the fonts to the outline, from the graphics to the sounds i say "this piece is excellent".

[Frieda P]

Though not as frightening as your avatar ;-) Thanks so much, I'm jazz'd you enjoyed this piece...

[ron]

Dark and sexy. But my soul is my own. It's not for sale, but you may barrow it from time to time...;) great poem, and I Agree with Sye.

[Frieda P]

Thanks easy to say when you're in the cafe ron. ;-) Thanks so much, glad you enjoyed...

[ron]

Lol. You are most welcome Frieda ;))

[Frieda P]

;-)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i could imagine Stevie Nicks writing and singing these lyrics...haunting...like shadows dancing in words.

jacob

[Frieda P]

Love Stevie Nicks, that's quite the compliment jacob, thanks so much.