Bella Luna che adesca

Bella Luna che adesca

A Poem by Frieda P
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~Enticing beautiful moon~

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Drink in this moment,
within your fickle heartbeat's eye
as the high takes you beyond
bella luna's mysterious allurement
the scent of bee stung wildflowers 
wafting over illuminated butterscotch fields
poppies blooming giddily in nectar'd glee
giggling at the sun's enticing intensity
cosmic fish do fly blithely
 overhead,
blowing kisses above the hemisphere
landing on paisley cloud bursts
singing in tune with moonbeams
drunk on cherry berry wine
a heart a'flutter in joyous jubilation
stardust twinkles in delightful glee,
speaks the universal language of the ages
as bella luna whirls in swoon'd adoration
whilst naked lover's dancing,
           seduces the world to spin upside down


















© 2014 Frieda P



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// poppies blooming giddily in nectar'd glee
giggling at the sun's enticing intensity
cosmic fish do fly blithely overhead,
blowing kisses above the hemisphere //

I think I'm dreaming here, somebody pinch me, ha! You make the dullest, hardest days turn into a beautiful, stress-free day. This is just utterly breath-taking.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

3 Years Ago

I'd pinch your cute cheeks if I could get to you noodlebumble! Ha grazie mille you made my day sweet.. read more
s y e

3 Years Ago

Ha, you have something about my cheeks, woman! ;-P Always a pleasure. xo



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I like when you say 'cosmic fish' and 'kisses above the hemisphere' it sounds very surreal

Posted 2 Years Ago


Your ability to describe nature and potray them so beautifully and penning them down in some words is magical. Your poems take to a completely new world where only literature and I stand. Amazing!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Wow thanks so much for your luverly review Simran!
Simran Kewlani

3 Years Ago

You're welcome.
This piece brought into my mind a drug, tasting sweetly, able to alter perceptions and magnify emotions to tremendous downs and elated ups . . . I quite liked this (apologies for failing to review earlier, I've had this tab open for days now)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Interesting Tai, how did i miss this glowing review, thanks so much...
this takes me back...back to my days in Italia...free roaming ...blissful....youth...there was no fear then and loads of moonlight! Thank you for transporting me today back to when it was simpler. I need this and
the line...... seduces the world to spin upside down.......keeps me:)


Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Wow Italian must have that effect on everyone, feel the same way. I wrote a poem about when I was i.. read more
I have been sufficiently seduced, but when am I not made so by your words? ;P My thirst for your literary epics (and they ARE epics) can never be quenched, no matter how many of its moments I drink in. You are an incredibly blessed poet, and I'm happy to be able to say I'm friends with someone of such inscrutable talent :) xo

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Oh my Benji, you just blew Mrs R's stiletto's right off her feet...seriously, you just blew me away .. read more
kublakhan27

3 Years Ago

You're most welcome Frieda :) xo
Shouts joy to me... with a touch of soul acid! Its freaky. Love it. There is so much movement... so much going on... kinda makes you spiny drunk reading it... fun... swooning.... intoxicated love joy.
Ha...
Thanks Frieda...

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

3 Years Ago

This made me smile Terry, thanks, must have been the sulfites in the wine ha ;-)
// poppies blooming giddily in nectar'd glee
giggling at the sun's enticing intensity
cosmic fish do fly blithely overhead,
blowing kisses above the hemisphere //

I think I'm dreaming here, somebody pinch me, ha! You make the dullest, hardest days turn into a beautiful, stress-free day. This is just utterly breath-taking.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

3 Years Ago

I'd pinch your cute cheeks if I could get to you noodlebumble! Ha grazie mille you made my day sweet.. read more
s y e

3 Years Ago

Ha, you have something about my cheeks, woman! ;-P Always a pleasure. xo
Wow!!!! this one made me take in this moment of reading such a beautiful piece this morning, once again you did breath fresh air through this. Very nicely done

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Thanks Cassie, jazz'd you enjoyed, I rather like the way this one turned out too...
Alice been handing you candy? Reminds me of a Peter Max painting. The colors!!!



Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Ha, she took me along for the ride, woo Peter Max, I'll take it!
The magic that the moon can bring... Frieda, you have a way of creating adjectives that make the reader not only see the image, but taste it... Bella scrittura, il mio amica... (or something like that...) :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Heck if I know, I wing Italiano myself, but I got it and grazie mille paesana ;-)

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Tags: Beautiful moon, bella luna, moments, wonderment, wildflowers, drunk, fantasy, love

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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