Xposure ~

Xposure ~

A Poem by Frieda P

kiss me now before you lose your discretion's breath
want to reveal a hush'd whisper to you of darkly hue'd synopsis
it's not peer'd in a sunrise, overcast with the black tide of moons
it's where heart's pulse sank to the depths cursing Hades agility 
a shadowy horse of a furtive crimson view etch'd in gunmetal 
the vile reticent side sketched within the palm of my hand
written long ago, chipped upon pedestals of bare'd iniquity
the only lullaby is spun within crow's clawing soulless caws   
terrifying, they recall your tempest face and conspire within 
gray recoils of mask'd redundancies ferociously passing through
a glance of declination could send you reeling in a frenzied tailspin
each designated way the beast resides sitting 'tween credibility's abduction
swim in the vast ocean perspective's of secret landscapes or
 take my hand and dance in the squalls of obscurity's seascapes
apprehension amidst costly chances in exposure's rejection and denial





© 2014 Frieda P



Author's Note

Frieda P


Artist ~ Crawfurd Anderson

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Searching for a distinct message quite literally hidden in the routine of daily actions and cherry-picking what you know in order to get one, and one that bothers you to no end . . . Or at least that's what I derived from this. Anywho, well done, friend. Keep it up~

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Those dark cherry picking I'd say Tai, people tend to run from those, thanks muchly...



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a poem with deepest meaning in it i really like it

Posted 3 Years Ago


It is always that kiss that leaves one yearning ever more, well done, good read.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Thanks so much kind sir.
Poets like you make me think I'm nowhere near "good" yet. Ah, Frieda. You are a master of wordplay.

Posted 3 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

3 Years Ago

You're too sweet Arzel, funny I feel that way about certain poets here too. You've already passed go.. read more
Searching for a distinct message quite literally hidden in the routine of daily actions and cherry-picking what you know in order to get one, and one that bothers you to no end . . . Or at least that's what I derived from this. Anywho, well done, friend. Keep it up~

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Those dark cherry picking I'd say Tai, people tend to run from those, thanks muchly...
take my hand and dance in the squalls of obscurity's seascapes...

Frieda, you know how to paint every emotion, every sensation in the spectrum of human relationships... Amazing piece.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

3 Years Ago

That's a huge compliment Rita, muchly appreciated my friend, grazie mille. :-)
Frieda, another stunning perfect poem. :-)

Kaze~ :-)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Grazie mille Kazie ;-)
Blackstar

3 Years Ago

Your very welcome Frieda! ;-)
If I had access to your computer I would break the apostrophe key. Other than that, this is a great ode.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Pssh & pfft'd ;-) Thanks Mark.
Amazing artwork, music and poetry. The poetry was direct and honest. Many places and thoughts you took me with the strong description in the poem. I enjoyed the complete poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Thanks Coyote, glad you enjoyed.
This piece of writing is rare but also unformulated. I do like the point and plot. Writing about sensuality and staying on task is not easy. Here, I believed you achieved this threshold. There are a lot of personal interjections that could be remedied with a thesaurus. Overall a decent piece of writing.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

3 Years Ago

It wasn't meant to be about sensuality, more so baring one's soul, being accepted for who you are, n.. read more
Did I just read such a a good poem, did my eyes just feast on very good material...wahhh!!!! this is very good for the eyes, for the mind..name it. good job sweet Frieda.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Oh my Cassie, are you whinging again, this is getting to be a habit my sweet friend, I meant thanks .. read more

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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