Consecrat'd Madness

 

Consecrate me in your madness

    sanctify this communion,

sketch me in bursting metaphorical hues,

  color'd tinges blushed of cardinal's soft sonnets

paint a picture within inky filigreed lace,

  finely woven silken thread'd tapestries

 my religion breathes your affinity

      harmony's rapport of favored essence

twist poetry into my hair,   whilst

   dancing upon the music in your stanza's hymn 

bathe me in peachy champagne bubbled prose

  suffuse butterfly shivers up my spine

i breathe the air you've fervidly script'd

   etch'd in blood flow awakens my senses,

the emotions artistes' bleed out

   you are my strength, my power

          my weakness, my Achilles heel ~

 swooning in the phases of your darkly lit moons

           cut me deep into the heart & gut

piercing movement of echoes unfold.  

        moving majestic amethyst  mountains, 

shred my soul with your dragon's breath

     anoint my breasts, oils that seep from thy quill

            make me punch drunk aberration's tipsy 

        drenching me in sparkling scarlet wine

clinging from the vines of destiny's path

           my soul's existence is solely dependent

    upon your utterly blissful verses within Elysian Fields 

 

                                                                        

                                                                            

                                                                                              

Author's Note

Reviews

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Frieda... "color'd tinges blushed of Cardinals soft sonnets".
Be still my soul. "Harmony's rapport of favored essence...
poetry twisted in my hair". You are my strength...
my weakness... my power... Freida... you have struck
beautiful chords of a heavenly harp within my heart.
truly... Pat

[Frieda P]

You humble me Pat, thanks so much.

[RichGee]

make me punch drunk aberration's tipsy
drenching me in sparkling scarlet wine
clinging from the vines of destiny's path
Mam, I have no idea where you go to find such expressions but I wish I could go with you...
Another exceptional piece.

[Cassie]

Eheyyyy...........you took me here to that very place you were while writing, you never fail your readers my dear friend, you know how to quench the thirst of your readers perfectly with each poem that you put down.

[Frieda P]

You're too kind my friend, thanks so much Cassie.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A glowering resemblance to ones' home town if ever there was, well done, good read.

[Frieda P]

Ah good point, thanks so much.

[Blue]

This poem is merely a confirmation of my sensible assumption. :P But I'm glad I have a friend with consecrated madness. Most of my friends have a boring kind. Haha.

I love this poem.

[Frieda P]

Ha is there such a thing as 'boring' madness you teenage nutter? ;-) Grazie mille.

[Blue]

Yeahhh! :P

[Frieda P]

Ha, all I can think of is ahhh shiny stuff. ;-P

[Tai Ryens]

Begging someone else to capture you in your own poetic mindset at your best, and to make this flair permanent as you skedaddle among ecstatic feelings. It almost sounds too good to be true, as if the downfall afterwards would be horrendous and sorrowful, although that might just be my mindset speaking for itself. May you revel in intellectual prowess for long, enough to permanently capture the brilliance of this age. Well done, friend!

[Frieda P]

Jazz'd you enjoyed my madness Tai....grazie!

[Rita L. Sev]

There's a classic feel to these verses, Frieda, a great flow here.
Love this: bathe me in peachy champagne bubbled prose... :)

[Frieda P]

Ha you kinky teachers. ;-) Grazie mille.

[ron]

Simply beautiful. Sounds like a wonderus place to be.

[Frieda P]

Ahhh but it is ron, thanks so much...

[ron]

You are very welcome Frieda. I would like to visit some time.

[Tina Louise UK]

always in awe when I read you...simply magnificent, a pleasure to read :) x

[Frieda P]

Awh thanks Tia, you're sweet, so glad you enjoy'd this one :-) xo

[Giggling Star]

How easy to fall for the poet that speaks to your heart. This is a beautiful piece Frieda. You deserve all the fine reviews you've received!

[Frieda P]

Muchly appreciated giggles, jazz'd you enjoyed my friend.