Wildflowers on Fire ~

Wildflowers on Fire ~

A Poem by Frieda P



inhale you,

swept away

like wildflowers on fire

essentia of your sweet burn

in frenzied obstinacy

pulsating my being,

easing into my enraptur'd soul


Your manhood ~

swelling of unspoken desires

sweet lavish abundance

flows through me 

as elation's crystalline, 

  pearlized pools of clarity,

symphonies burst into exhilaration

sun & moon rise simultaneous

melted in your rush

aside  sea's crashing  thunder,

lulled into an exhaustion of

a spent fury's

  powerful embrace


I breathe the essence

within your crest'd glory,

exhaling

smoky

 tears 

ravish'd ~




© 2014 Frieda P



Author's Note

Frieda P

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OH MY.....smoky scintillating sensuality!! This kraken steals your breath and fills the body with toe curling splendor. I'm sighing all over your words...and the warmth I feel isnt a fever. Ha.... love this doesnt even come close...more like I'm entranced by the scent of your burning floral lust! Mmmm...mmm....going in my favorites!!

100 wildflowers in full bloom...;-)xo


Posted 3 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Oh wooo, dancing to your review my sweet friend, so glad this gave you some kind of fever ;-) Grazi.. read more
redflutterby

3 Years Ago

Lol....and I'm nutters for making you dance!! Shake it...shake it...whoot whoot...go Frieda...go Fri.. read more



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This is a perfectly tame steamy write. What a great way to get sexy. Anyway, a lovely write, and a great form and font too.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Breathtaking piece, A wonderful flow and the format made it all the more enjoyable. Like wildfloers on fire, something about flowers and fire...makes for such a deep passion. I really enjoyed this!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Firstly I love the title, secondly I love the way you describe each and everything so well and you know you could make some one your readers(not me) get that feeling. there..you know what am talking about...right???

Posted 3 Years Ago


A lovely poem of fields of scorched meadows. I found the song to be beautifully placed as an accompaniment. Smooth as silk and hot as hades. It says it all.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Woo thanks Anne, glad it took you there...
I can definitely tell you're inspired by the passionate and the equipped..wow steamy stuff

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Grazie mille mojo........
Wildflowers on fire...that sounds very passionate...

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Thanks Marie...
You're so good Frieda. I adored this one, every single image that jumped out at me, every line. I am sitting here speechless. Wanting to give you some amazing review when the only word that comes out my mouth is 'wow'

Posted 3 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Always take a 'wow' and you know I love it when you're speechless nooldlebumble.........x
Stunning work as usual, Frieda!! I happened upon this one this afternoon in my "suggested reading," and of course, you did not disappoint! Not just anyone can write lines like:

"I inhale you,
swept away
like wildflowers on fire
essentia of your sweet burn
in frenzied obstinacy."

Your work is always so full of passion, and yet you write the most wonderful, unusual descriptions of many of the poets I've read. I've said this before, but your work continues to inspire me! I'm always on the hunt for new, unique ways to express and describe things, and I'll turn to your poetry for ideas.

Plus, when describing romance or sex, it is easy to fall into cliches or "romance novel" type adjectives that are over-the-top and in turn, un-sexy. I've never found that with your writing. Continue to keep up the fantastic work, and I promise I'll continue to read it!!!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Holy Eric, you swept me away with this glowing review, thanks so much, you humble me my friend!!
Eric Pudalov

3 Years Ago

Aww...you're always welcome, Frieda! I like to give in-depth reviews, because I feel they're more m.. read more
Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Ha sly fox you....well I for one appreciate your big ego ;-P
Oh yes, yes ,yes !!!!.This was sensual and romantic and I want seconds :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Ha...me thinks you climax'd pazzo ;-) Grazie mille....
Vidya Bacchus

3 Years Ago

Ha I really should see a doctor about that lol.
Hot write! So much expressed in so few words!
You are so talented!


Posted 3 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Thanks so much for your kind words Claire!

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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