You want a piece~put a ring on it...

You want a piece~put a ring on it...

A Poem by Frieda P
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just messing around ;-)

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You wanted a piece
       of my cherry pie
I said no way Casanova, 
   you buy the whole she/bang
    or no bed for you my man
    ~ he/ put a ring on it, 
now I wish I'd tasted his fare
  had his cupcakes, cold as ice,
             ain't no spice...




© 2014 Frieda P


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Always sample an all-you-can-eat BEFORE filling a doggy bag and taking the fare home to enjoy; maybe you'll have to use the old, "Well, it was nice meeting you, but now, if you'll excuse me, I've got to go home and take my goiter medication." excuse!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

What? Ha, I think Wini is getting the best of you Mike....thanks!



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Seems a lil she-somebody woke up thinking, 'Now then, what shall i do today, make a cake or the bed?' And from nowhere she could put her finger to, a deep voice whispered something about treasure chests and so, a node was written.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Oh just fooling around a bit petulia, grazie mille....
Lord, what in the hell does my comment even mean?

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Beats me................
Always sample an all-you-can-eat BEFORE filling a doggy bag and taking the fare home to enjoy; maybe you'll have to use the old, "Well, it was nice meeting you, but now, if you'll excuse me, I've got to go home and take my goiter medication." excuse!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

What? Ha, I think Wini is getting the best of you Mike....thanks!
I'm laughing as I read this...yep, you can regret buying the merchandise without checking it out THOROUGHLY.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

NOW you tell me. ;-) Thanks muchly...
Got hindsight..?
LOL..a cute write.
Jaded or substantial growth.... ?
Fun stuff.
Scott

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Ha just having some fun, thanks Scott.
Scott Metro

10 Years Ago

My pleasure..!!!
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ron
Cold cup cakes are never fun. They tend to shrink in the cold.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Colder yet, thanks ron.
ron

10 Years Ago

We all know cup cakes shrink in the cold...:). But let me tell you its not fun when you want them ho.. read more
Well at least you can look at your big shiny ring when you are partaking of his cold ...cupcakes lol

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Oh it doesn't shine bright enough to camouflage that fact. ha
Vidya Bacchus

10 Years Ago

So you should have seen what he was packing before you took the shiny ring my dear lol
Made me laugh and remember my mother with the whole cow purchase thing when I was giving those dairy products for free. : )

Posted 10 Years Ago


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icelandicblue

10 Years Ago

Absolutely not! My sons either LOL.
icelandicblue

10 Years Ago

She wants a ring she can afford to buy herself a nice one.
Frieda P

10 Years Ago

She's buying her own engagement ring?
I hate that song, but I love your interpretation of such declaration measuring up in this game of ring around this prose-yeee..nice

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Frieda P

10 Years Ago

I'm not fond of it either but it fit the bill....thanks again mojo.
Who ate my cup cake ? I see the crumbs .Some pay for spice . Others .......

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Ha were those your crumbs, shoulda known............

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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