I tread softly upon your legacy ~

I tread softly upon your legacy ~

A Poem by Frieda P
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"Can I show you what you are for me" ~Evanescence

"

I tread softly upon your legacy

angel of mine with broken wings,

traces left behind in soft whispers

the best of times gone awry,

when you whirl through my head

soaring on kaleidoscopic tranquility

wrapped in lavender zephyr sighs

dancing on clouds of ethereal hope

carefree and peaceful without worry

floating above lapis forbidden skies

like a effulgent butterfly haunting me

   in the darkly mindless hours of night

when the haze clears my conscious etchings

       you flutter amidst my words

exhaling ephemeral moments of poetry 

swirls of splendiferous opulence 

dreams beyond my comprehension,

I escape to heavenly dimensions 

 'drips of moonlight washing over me'

    lingering in this stately haven of intention 



© 2014 Frieda P


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Frieda, you wrap us in lavender zephyr sighs and lapis forbidden skies allowing us to whirl with and within the chaos of fluttering butterflies emerging from the book of your sorrow and we may not know all that you feel inside, we want to stand by you inhaling and exhaling the moments of your poetry... Frieda this writing you do is excellent in its emotional depth as well as just plain out right beautiful, expressive artistry... loved the song and graphic... did you notice the blue one on the right, me singing your poem, sorry, you drew me in... ~~redzone

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Your review is quite luverly curt and touched my heart, thanks so much my sweet friend. x



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My heart grows heavy reading this...your words etch the pain of your loss so perfectly. The sad emptiness is hard to behold in this poems aching beauty. You are in my thoughts dear friend... hugs! xo

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Frieda P

10 Years Ago

You always touch my heart Red, thanks so much my friend. xo
Sadness clings to your every word this day my sweet friend. It is unimaginable the loss and pain you deal with while hearing those empty heartbeats during the silence of night’s loneliest hours. I fall beneath these dark skies and I weep for you. Words, thoughts, memories sent hoping that her eyes will find them and know exactly what she meant to you. In my heart I know she knows.

Sad but beautifully written Frieda.


Posted 10 Years Ago


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Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Thanks always for your continued support Jack, muchly appreciated.

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