Love is more profound...

Love is more profound...

A Poem by Frieda P
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than an intangible feeling

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Love is more profound 
   than an intangible feeling
serious play on heartstrings
    within duet's concerto
poetry written on the soul
    of imperfect harmony
graceful dance within turbulence 
     of storm clouds
utterances of understanding
        'tween secret glances
sentiments spoken on lofty clouds,
    scripted in skywriting's destiny
a bond that supersedes
   one's own self-indulgence 
awakening spirit's burning
    desires of body & mind
acceptance in exhalation's dark spaces
     embraces reveling in sparks of
familiarity's illumination
     unfurled in the ecstasy 
        of another's inspirations 
surrender bound of peace & truths
         in mystery's exalted splendor

Amore, je t'aime. ~ in any language...

© 2014 Frieda P


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Three simple words just are not enough to describe that feeling. You paint a lover's portrait here...marvelous

Posted 9 Years Ago


"poetry written on the soul
of imperfect harmony"
Splendid work with perfect lines.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Ah, bittersweet love.. with all it's imperfections and still it's love.. beautiful, Frieda

Posted 9 Years Ago


Usually your poems consist of a surreal quality that truly describes the profound emotions of love, but I feel that this one took it to a whole new level. You aren't soaring in the clouds, you are on the ground watching as your emotions paint the sky for you. The intangible feeling comes nowhere close to truly describing love, for it is a separate entity far too tremendous for our souls to contain within themselves. Breathtaking, loved this Freida.

Posted 9 Years Ago


poetry written on the soul
of imperfect harmony...

This is just beautiful, Frieda. A loving *sigh* on the page. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


I love this poem keep up the great work and keep them coming

Posted 9 Years Ago


I loved the use of the language. The words danced on the page.
"poetry written on the soul
of imperfect harmony"
I like the above lines. Good to be in harmony with another. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Simply you took my breath away

Posted 9 Years Ago


brilliantly explained.... and so true.... loved the way the words flowed....!!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


this is so true, it is much more...but I do like the intangibles as well, the undefined part---what we don't quite understand can also be what we feel the most.

nicely done, Frieda.

Posted 9 Years Ago



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