Hot coffee glances ~

Reminiscing  within gentle quivers,  

   entrancing scent of magnolias  

    wafting on summer breezes, 

early morning's steaming coffee glances

     love scribbles left on the sheets

      in inky true blue sentiment's hue

  a warm embrace around the waist

   wisps of hair flying in moonlight

tender kisses on closed eyes,

   sweet whisper'd  lingerings  upon

    indulgences  of oil drenched skin, 

        breathing in reflections of  spirit's fiery embers

          lit the intensity ablaze in my heart  

Author's Note

Reviews

[kublakhan27]

I am slowly but surely attempting to catch up on some of your older pieces, which I didn't get around to reviewing when they were still new...you know I hate missing out on any of your works, but with an imagination a prolific as yours, sometimes things slip through the cracks...you can forgive me for missing the odd one, right Mrs.R? ;)

Two reasons for starting with this one: it's the oldest one of yours in my RR list, and of course, the title...of course, after 67 reviews there isn't much else for even me to say...it takes me about five poems to get that many reviews, but that's beside the point ;P And you can probably surmise the things that are going through my mind as I read this one anyway...it has me thinking, probably more now than I would have been had I read it in April...it's fairly direct by your standards, but as always, it's unmistakably you...I wonder how long it's been since you've read this one yourself...I'm as intrigued by that as I am by the poem, cuz I'm wondering what you'll say when you do ultimately get this review...again, there just isn't much I can say about the poem itself, I can only concur with that everyone else has said...I'll try to get so some of the others as soon as possible love :) xo

[Jazique]

Oh, that was just beautiful. I cannot describe how lovely that description and wish that happened to me as I am in a coffee shop. What coffee shop do you go to? All I can recommend is you have a little extra space between 'reminiscing' and 'withing' and 'indulgences' and 'of'. Also 'lingerings' should be 'lingering's'. Other than that you did a spectacular job and especially when it came to descriptions and imagery as your words had a lovely flow that brought the whole thing to life. Well done.

[Kleio13]

" breathing in reflections of spirit's fiery embers

lit the intensity ablaze in my heart ", love these lines and i like the picture of the flowers on the end.

[Richard Layne]

Nice imagery of soft moments. Damn, isn't that a wonderful feeling that you brought us?

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

An emotional and touching piece that reads well.

[star73]

love the music:) very touching

[star73]

very nice and steamy I feel that way with my husband

[TPK Stories]

nice love story...gives you hope for the future...great write...

[Shirlena]

Woman so romantic this is...looking over a steaming hot cup of dessert coffee at the man who could create smoke with eyes just as warm staring back at you. You both thinking as if twins reading each other's dreamy head lines. "Let's get it ON!" Oooo Lawd, whatchu say! Hot ' ish Mommy.

[Einstein Noodle]

completely agree with the Noodle! big heavy sigh ... true love really does exist ... your poem lifts me up Freida .. nice one and thanks!
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[s y e]

Sigh..... this is really so beautiful Frieda. You've left me utterly breathless and speechless. The imagery and wording is on spot and amazing.

Flip flops & all that jazz! xo