Hot coffee glances ~

Hot coffee glances ~

A Poem by Frieda P
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reminiscing...

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Reminiscing  within gentle quivers,  

   entrancing scent of magnolias  

    wafting on summer breezes, 

early morning's steaming coffee glances

     love scribbles left on the sheets

      in inky true blue sentiment's hue

  a warm embrace around the waist

   wisps of hair flying in moonlight

tender kisses on closed eyes,

   sweet whisper'd  lingerings  upon

    indulgences  of oil drenched skin, 

        breathing in reflections of  spirit's fiery embers

          lit the intensity ablaze in my heart  

© 2014 Frieda P


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Frieda P

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I am slowly but surely attempting to catch up on some of your older pieces, which I didn't get around to reviewing when they were still new...you know I hate missing out on any of your works, but with an imagination a prolific as yours, sometimes things slip through the cracks...you can forgive me for missing the odd one, right Mrs.R? ;)

Two reasons for starting with this one: it's the oldest one of yours in my RR list, and of course, the title...of course, after 67 reviews there isn't much else for even me to say...it takes me about five poems to get that many reviews, but that's beside the point ;P And you can probably surmise the things that are going through my mind as I read this one anyway...it has me thinking, probably more now than I would have been had I read it in April...it's fairly direct by your standards, but as always, it's unmistakably you...I wonder how long it's been since you've read this one yourself...I'm as intrigued by that as I am by the poem, cuz I'm wondering what you'll say when you do ultimately get this review...again, there just isn't much I can say about the poem itself, I can only concur with that everyone else has said...I'll try to get so some of the others as soon as possible love :) xo

Posted 9 Years Ago


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This poem completely conquers you with its beautiful visual creating an ideal setup for a beautiful romantic morning.

Posted 10 Years Ago


"early morning's steaming coffee glances'
Nothing better. Early morning glances and coffee with someone you love. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


I love this one and the song the song is sublime !

Posted 10 Years Ago


Now it is I who needs the walk in freezer.What a very romantic and steamy poem chica,I love this song and your poetry always obviously without question :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


early morning's steaming coffee glances
love scribbles left on the sheets
in inky true blue sentiment's hue.

Your writing is as like it play before me. How anyone can more expect from good write. Great.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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This is so beautiful Frieda. If only love could feel like this every morning.

Posted 10 Years Ago


simply lovely sentiments, delicately expressed... sigh...scent of magnolias, hair in the moonlight, soft kiss upon close eyes...could this get more romantic? Living vicariously through this beautiful poem, lol. Beautiful and as brilliant as ever!

Posted 10 Years Ago



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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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