~ I want to skydive in red stilettos

~ I want to skydive in red stilettos

A Poem by Frieda P



I want to skydive in red stilettos

take a leap off the wild side,

sip Chateau Lafite & Margaux

whilst driving 100 mph,

wind blown tresses

in a vintage Lamborghini,

cruise on the Rising Sun

in the south of France

sunbathe naked on the sands

of an Italian villa's shores,

take a cool dip in luscious 

champagne bubbles 

 at the Fontana di Trevi,

dance a sultry tango amidst 

a moonlit Brazilian jungle,

have my spirit soar

in sheer delirium

yet, 

more than anything at all ~



I want to love

 with all the fire & soul 

in my heart


© 2014 Frieda P



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Frieda P

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Oh I how I love these poems....I have wrote a few myself and I know how much fun they are and at the same time courageous to put them out there...which is why I don't share mine...big chicken....but not you my new friend...Love your style. This is beautiful and daring, feminine and strong. Great work!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia

3 Years Ago

LOL I know I was told the same but it didn't stick but you can comment all you want good or bad ...I.. read more
Frieda P

3 Years Ago

There's a difference between critiquing a poem and saying it sucks, I'll tell you that in private ha.. read more
Patricia

3 Years Ago

OK you got a deal :)



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Personally, I don't want to do anything in red stilettos, but the message is bold and wonderful - grab it all, carpe diem and lay it all out there... Great one here, Frieda!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Love it! Sounds like fun!

Posted 3 Years Ago


"I want to love
with all the fire & soul
in my heart"

How I wish I had said these lines to someone... fiery emotion, a flammable love. Beautiful :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

3 Years Ago

'Flammable love', I really like that, thanks muchly janzsuico ;-)
I want to go too, but I'll stick to shoes. ;) I really enjoyed this piece. Amazing job! :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Ha I hope so, not sure you'd look grand in stilettos. ;) Grazie mille.
I wish you all the love that you deserve and you know belongs to you!
This beautiful fast paced yet a write that holds me back to re-read...
Is the prayer of a woman
Genuine


Posted 3 Years Ago


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Frieda P

3 Years Ago

You're sweet kiddo, thanks muchly.
Sounds like you want the whole enchilada? All I can say is go for it.

Posted 3 Years Ago


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Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Thanks Michael.
How did I miss this one Frieda??? I just hate it when life (and work) gets in the way of great poetry. You know how much I love poems about love and romance and this is sweet and sexy, soft and strong at the same time...definitely one of my favs by you - and to be honest - as a lover of sexy shoes - you had me at the title!

:) Julie

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Awh thanks, means a lot coming from the the mistress of romance :) Yes, life is so unfair when it g.. read more
Woof! Excusez-moi, puis-je dire la trame?
Beautifully done Mon Cher! ;)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Merci Beaucoup & RAWR ;)
I bet you would have known the title would have reeled me in when I saw stilettos. I'm so like my mama ;-) this was great. I loved how it gave off a 'I'm free' vibe.

An amazingly well written poem. And... SHOES !!!

Stilettos & all that jazz xoxo

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

s y e

3 Years Ago

Ha, I reviewed this two days ago but you didn't get it. :-P Always a pleasure, you know I lurv my sh.. read more
Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Oh my gremlins messing with my stilettos....ha it figures round here. x
s y e

3 Years Ago

Yes I love your shoes too.... I borrowed a pair by the way.
after all...its all about love..love is all you need...this poem makes me love love more.
a poem of the free-spirited...well done.
in my language, "bahut achi hai"!
:)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Shubhangi

3 Years Ago

hehe...hey what time is it there? its 2:30am here!! ;)
Frieda P

3 Years Ago

5:03 PM, shouldn't you be sleeping? Another poet with insomnia. :)
Shubhangi

3 Years Ago

yes, to some extent but not exactly... like now i am feeling sleepy...so good night frieda... or sho.. read more

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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