~ I want to skydive in red stilettos

~ I want to skydive in red stilettos

A Poem by Frieda P



I want to skydive in red stilettos

take a leap off the wild side,

sip Chateau Lafite & Margaux

whilst driving 100 mph,

wind blown tresses

in a vintage Lamborghini,

cruise on the Rising Sun

in the south of France

sunbathe naked on the sands

of an Italian villa's shores,

take a cool dip in luscious 

champagne bubbles 

 at the Fontana di Trevi,

dance a sultry tango amidst 

a moonlit Brazilian jungle,

have my spirit soar

in sheer delirium

yet, 

more than anything at all ~



I want to love

 with all the fire & soul 

in my heart


© 2014 Frieda P



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Oh I how I love these poems....I have wrote a few myself and I know how much fun they are and at the same time courageous to put them out there...which is why I don't share mine...big chicken....but not you my new friend...Love your style. This is beautiful and daring, feminine and strong. Great work!

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Patricia

3 Years Ago

LOL I know I was told the same but it didn't stick but you can comment all you want good or bad ...I.. read more
Frieda P

3 Years Ago

There's a difference between critiquing a poem and saying it sucks, I'll tell you that in private ha.. read more
Patricia

3 Years Ago

OK you got a deal :)



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Well, you are very ambitious, and I hope you get to fulfill all your dreams. But I suspect you already know how to ove with all your heart and soul.

Posted 3 Years Ago


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Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Sweet Marie, but apparently you've never spoken to my ex...
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I dare to see this!!!!!!I I loved it and your end was awesome:))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))





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Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Ha truth be told, I'm afraid of heights, but a girl can dream, can't she? ;) Thanks Jon!
FEA

3 Years Ago

That she can you'd look good coming out of that plane in red heels! A guy can dream cant he:)))))))).. read more
Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Ha we're just a couple of dreamers eh? If I did ever muster up the courage though, it'd have to be .. read more
i can not tell you how glad i am you want to go sky diving .. your red stilettos are way enough to convince me to go again :) lets do it!! Simply Red .. another of my favorite bands ...
one of your best again Freida ... all those delicious things that money affords are not as important as
" ....to love
with all the fire & soul
in my heart"
but they sure would be grand .. sets my dream machine in motion AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAh!
i must say you certainly do love with all your fire and soul in your poetry darling! enjoyed this poem a lot ..now when are we taking the jump???
E.

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Frieda P

3 Years Ago

You know you'd have to push me out of the dang plane E...ha, it's on the bucket list but I doubt it'.. read more
Einstein Noodle

3 Years Ago

one never can tell ... i love the dream ...maybe i could stow away and beach comb for wine in France.. read more
Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Sounds like a luverly plan, I'm so there. ;)
Hi Frieda. Such a lovely writing. It reminded me of the 100 things I must do before I die. But they don't really matter after all. Love is enough to do the trick. You are a fabulous poetess and have your finger on the pulse of the reader well.

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Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Thanks so much Divya, you and me both.... let's get this show on the road. :)
The skydive as a metaphor for the drop into the unknown, yet longing for the freedom you'd have as you fall into all kinds of worlds here and there, feeling at home at all of them only because your love feels unrestrained in the new atmospheres within which you existed in. Well done, friend, I enjoyed muchly.

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Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Thanks muchly Tai, I always enjoy hearing your take.
well written like always ...

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Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Thanks Ahena...
You can wear your red stilettos when you come skydiving with me

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Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Like I told E, you'd have to give me a huge push.
a dream we can all share Frieda, but the mind is stronger than the body...Who knows what we will be doing in a hundred years time

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Frieda P

3 Years Ago

In a hundred year, eh? I'm already tired.............
All of it and I mean all of this poem was magnificent. That is one classy bucket list my friend. I wish all of that for you and more. The presentation was gorgeous as was each event you created with your skillful pen and creative mind. Wow.

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Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Thanks so much Anne, jazz'd you enjoyed.
This was very enjoyable, drive in south of france...naked sun bath...and simply red is one of my favorite band...the whole deal was simply amazing!

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Frieda P

3 Years Ago

One of my favorites too, thanks so much for your kind words A.

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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