Magpie Madness

Magpie Madness

A Poem by Frieda P

Madness loom'd overhead
   like an over eager magpie
      circling  pleasure's pain,
 breathing in the poison headiness
     of feather-less flights 
         in indiscretion's consumption,
 closing in to pluck the decay,
  under skin's frustrated blight
    carrion of a ravag'd heart it did consume 
            suck'd the afflicted remains
                  of vulturous destruction
  pecking blind eyes in testimony
                of  dispirited manifestations   

© 2014 Frieda P


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Frieda P

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Descretion can eat you up!

Posted 9 Years Ago


OMG, another amazing write, Frieda.

Kaze~ :-) xx

Posted 9 Years Ago


Like heckle and jeckle in an alternate universe. I like it

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

9 Years Ago

Ha, now that's funny...
Poe has nothing on you, Frieda.....you go darker as well as any poet alive or dead...
you words here bring chills.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

9 Years Ago

Holy Jacob, you just took my breath away with that one, thanks so much, you humble me...
Oh this made me cry! D****t I hate it when that happens, this is dark and beautiful and I place I know! Excellent writing :)..........

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia

9 Years Ago

:))))) right back at ya!
Frieda P

9 Years Ago

Do two crazies cancel each other out I wonder haha ;)
Patricia

9 Years Ago

Ummmmmm pretty sure not, but if we drive everyone else crazy that will be the norm and that would be.. read more
You know I love your darkest writing. This was a poetic exorcism I thoroughly enjoyed. Your poetry always takes me to another place.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

9 Years Ago

Woo I like that, 'poetic exorcism', thanks so much G.
Deuces

9 Years Ago

My pleasure, Frieda.
A delicious darkness......
Tingle....


Scotty
xo

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

9 Years Ago

Thanks Scotty xo
Scott Metro

9 Years Ago

My pleasure sugar..!
Dark and enchanting."under skin's frustrated blight 
  carrion of a ravag'd heart it did consume      
      suck'd the afflicted remains" -- truly stunning! :))

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

9 Years Ago

Thanks so much, jazz'd you enjoyed! :)
Moonie

9 Years Ago

That was a really quick answer! It was a pleasure to read your poem!:))
Frieda P

9 Years Ago

I'm not usually that quick, I saw it pop up on the live feed...haha thanks again!
Truly dark and amazing piece..you always astound me with your words.. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

9 Years Ago

You humble me with your kind words, grazie mille! :)
MagicAl

9 Years Ago

Prego!! :)

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Added on June 22, 2014
Last Updated on June 22, 2014
Tags: indiscretion, poison, heartbreak, madness, magpie, manifestations, consumption

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Frieda P
Frieda P

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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