SHOEGASM darling!

SHOEGASM darling!

A Poem by Frieda P
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...an old one 'revam'd just for fun

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butterflies for your tootsies
lovely trinkets for the imagination
my heart's desire without an attitude
lusty little morsels to whet your appetite
red fook me shoes are nice
you tripped over my lace
i stepped on your face
nothing flat i scaled the tempo
excitement like cotton candy
round and round and up and down
fly me to the moon in my stilettos
girl's best friend is still her rockin' high hell heel shoes
take the whole package or leave me in my wardrobe
boot strap leather lashes damask across your back  
i'll strip naked but don't disturb my footwear
you'll get a vampy stride up side your head
spike stuck in the chest until you're laid to rest
lovers come and go but these were a bloody steal
you can't hold a candle to my Jimmy Choos'



© 2014 Frieda P



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I will certainly "take the whole package" Frieda, if you will allow for my steeled toe clod hoppers, better known as Pennsylvania "s**t kickers" or "biker boots"... I may be in NYC now, but I kept the boots and attitude... Whaddda say Frieda, wanna dance?? lol... :-p

Even with the butterflies, how do you manage to walk in those sexy assed shoegasms??? I think I understand the "attitude", pain is a great attitude creator..

But Frieda, even without those stilettos, you got"attitude", so strutt your sexy self, wherever you desire and let all those in the way tremble... 1000 stiletto flops and jazzy sways. ;0)
~~redzone

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

redzone

3 Years Ago

Wanna bet?? Try me.. HA :-p
Frieda P

3 Years Ago

But of course, but if you mess up my dancing stilettos there'll be hell to pay hon ;)
redzone

3 Years Ago

Funny, cause I was gonna say the same about your stilettos... looks like hell is on the way.. OHNO.... read more



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Shoes are a girl's best friend.. give her the right shoes and she can conquer the world.sizzling red stilletos can kill men... oooooo i just had a shoegasm ;)..it was funny and lively Freida.

~Sophy

Posted 3 Years Ago


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Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Ha...exactly!! Thanks for the smile Sophy :)
Sophy Freebirds

3 Years Ago

It was nothing ;)
I thought Diamonds were a girl's best friend? Ah well, if the shoe fits... All colloquialisms aside, this was fun to read. Now I just need a walk-in closet, and I'll be SET.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Haha...sounds like a plan. Thanks so much for the giggle Michael.
I will certainly "take the whole package" Frieda, if you will allow for my steeled toe clod hoppers, better known as Pennsylvania "s**t kickers" or "biker boots"... I may be in NYC now, but I kept the boots and attitude... Whaddda say Frieda, wanna dance?? lol... :-p

Even with the butterflies, how do you manage to walk in those sexy assed shoegasms??? I think I understand the "attitude", pain is a great attitude creator..

But Frieda, even without those stilettos, you got"attitude", so strutt your sexy self, wherever you desire and let all those in the way tremble... 1000 stiletto flops and jazzy sways. ;0)
~~redzone

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

redzone

3 Years Ago

Wanna bet?? Try me.. HA :-p
Frieda P

3 Years Ago

But of course, but if you mess up my dancing stilettos there'll be hell to pay hon ;)
redzone

3 Years Ago

Funny, cause I was gonna say the same about your stilettos... looks like hell is on the way.. OHNO.... read more
Frieda, I love the tempo of this one...It's funny and irreverent and just shoecrazy...beautiful write!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

3 Years Ago

It was fun to write Star, thanks muchly, that's moi...shoecrazy :)
I have a bit of a shoe fetish. :)
I'm human, and female... Sue me.
Where can I buy those butterfly shoes? :)
Loved this Frieda!!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Laughing here, my sentiments exactly!! And I wish I knew, thanks Ance! ;)
and usually there aren't sales, where you can get two lovers for the price of one, in case one doesn't work so well, there's a back up...

no back up here, just backing away from the dazzle of the shoes.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

3 Years Ago

That's rather a brilliant idea jacob...see what you can do about it...........
Holy flipping flip flop stilettos I think I just had a SHOEGASM darling! This was fantastic, Mama F - You really hit the ball out of the park with this and put your foot down, haha! Damn, I want me a pair of those shoes. Birthday soon, hint hint! ;-) Loved this one!

Red hot fiery stilettos and all that jazz! xoxo

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

s y e

3 Years Ago

I'm looking for your burfday
Frieda P

3 Years Ago

I'm not celebrating anymore unless I can go backwards ;) But yours is comin' up....I'll be on the l.. read more
s y e

3 Years Ago

Oh you remember, hahaha. I hope I'm not going to get 17 birthday punches! xo
You can go anywa.. read more
A man is only a man, but good shoes make life worthwhile.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

3 Years Ago

HA exactly Marie ....
Nothing says hotter than hell better than stilettos lol

Posted 3 Years Ago


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Frieda P

3 Years Ago

They may kill us but we'll die with a smile on our faces ;) ha
Tate Morgan

3 Years Ago

so would we
I love the tone of this, right now having an awful time with this site and the fake Java update -- it is prompting me to update every five seconds. Trying to erase history and use malwarebytes, but so far it is driving me nuts. Anyway, yes, having recently rediscovered sexy shoes, I must concur ...

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Oh that's a b***h, hope you get it figured out, thanks KL!

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