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Maître Peintre‏

Maître Peintre‏

A Poem by Frieda P
"

~Master painter...

"

Hpainted me of Chantilly lace
      and dark cherry liqueur,
  gently touch'd upon the curvature
                   of my breast
sable brush dipping every nuance,
    wildflowers tucked  away at the nape of my neck
               as silky zephyr's swept through my hair

I trembled in quivering anticipation
              whilst he stroked with flair'd intensity,
my cheeks color'd
                        an Alla Prima rosy glow,
    skin the shade of alabaster Romanticism
                  eyes like jeweled orbs of dark umber adoration

     piece de resistance, 
                  alas my master painter
                     with bliss'd feathery fibers 

         etched my muse's essence,
composed the heart
                in divine golden flax
            forever entwining the desirous 
                            melodies of our soul



© 2014 Frieda P



Author's Note

Frieda P
Artwork ~ Herbert James Draper


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Featured Review

This is one of the most romantic tales you have penned. It is sultry and sensual with a depth of definition just like an oil painting. I have said before you write like a great master and you do. Your pigment is the colourful metaphor and the expressive word.

Posted 3 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

3 Years Ago

You've truly humbled me with your kind words John, took my breath away actually, thanks so much.
John Alexander McFadyen

3 Years Ago

As they say, 'you are worth it' my Lady.
Frieda P

3 Years Ago

I'm tickled, you have the featured review, grazie mille again John.



Reviews

Nice write, my friend. it's so romantic. :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sigh.

Please stop
My beating heart
Which threatens to explode
With each word read
Of your passionate write.

Rekindling
What was once
Dormant
As the result
Of an act of cruelty
From a love one.

Giving hope
Maybe just maybe
She exist for me
Out there.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Thanks so much therisa, this might be one of my favorites, jazz'd you enjoyed, and thanks for the li.. read more
therisa

3 Years Ago

Your welcomed, on all fronts, Frieda.
This is one of the most romantic tales you have penned. It is sultry and sensual with a depth of definition just like an oil painting. I have said before you write like a great master and you do. Your pigment is the colourful metaphor and the expressive word.

Posted 3 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

3 Years Ago

You've truly humbled me with your kind words John, took my breath away actually, thanks so much.
John Alexander McFadyen

3 Years Ago

As they say, 'you are worth it' my Lady.
Frieda P

3 Years Ago

I'm tickled, you have the featured review, grazie mille again John.
The gentleness of this piece really worked. Such beautiful imagery and tantalising emotion woven together give the new day a big smile.

Regards
Troy

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Thanks so much Troy, sorry for the late response, the cafe doesn't like to send my alerts regularly .. read more
The artwork is awesome. So is the poem.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Thanks so much Junert.
The clash of gentle and forceful is the engine that drives this piece Mrs.R...I feel like I've been given unlimited access to a nude painter's mind, who just happens to be painting a lover ;) Dark cherry liqueur sounds like the perfect warm-up to such an intimate activity, or activities should I say, for there's clearly more than painting going on here...actually maybe there's not even painting at all haha But the way you describe the ways of a painter with the strokes and sable brushes and so on, I'd swear this was written by a painter...as always, it's the intensity of emotion that gets me right in the gut, among other places in this case...I wish I knew how to paint, like this guy ;) A luscious evocation of the art that is the female body...awesome Mrs.R :) xo

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Woo dancing on the ceiling, I'm sated, now my night is complete! :) Thanks from the bottom of my hea.. read more
kublakhan27

3 Years Ago

My heart is truly warmed my sweetest friend...there are no words to express how much that means...it.. read more
Astonishing! You make me want to ravish the words I'm reading until I'm drunk in poetry.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Well thanks so much, what a sweet review Alfred.
Oh Frieda, such lovely bristles on my arms raise having each swipe of your brush so elegantly wisp.

This is my favorite of yours as yet. Each word nestles comfortably together as if they'd been waiting in the dictionary for you to align them all this time, and the font you chose so compliments the beautiful verses.

This is so very lovely.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Thanks x...haven't seen you around in a while, so jazz'd you enjoyed this one.
Amazingly penned, Friedalicious!...

You always stir the heart and inspire the artist's soul.

Divinity cannot be defined in art, yet you have showcased it in vibrant colors.

Eloquent write!~xoxo~:)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

3 Years Ago

You're sweet dear Robbie, thanks so much my amazing friend! :) xoxox
The Artist sees... If only we could all be as lovely as your Muse, Frieda! This is a great piece.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Yes my muse was being sweet on this day, grazie Rita!

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